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Walking down that street, I didn’t know what would happen all I knew was at the end there was suppose to be the answer to all of my unanswered questions. When I started down that dark empty motionless street all I had set in my mind was to get to the end, nothing else but that my family didn’t matter nor did my life I hungered more for the satisfaction of figuring out the truth of a dark secret. What, what was that, was it broken glass, a cat, or was it the morning of a human dieing in the distance, I still did not care. I had no feelings I did not feel any pain or remorse, nothing at all. Continuing down that street I started to think of all the different things people have told me. There had been a total of 14 deaths, the funny thing is the bodies were never found just puddles of blood staining the ground, another thing I heard was that anything that went down this street learned something about themselves they wish they never learned. What another sound but this time it was closer and more distinct still what was it. I’m almost there just a little aaaaa. Ow where am I at, (looks around) I fell but where. I pulled out my lighter that I had stashed in my back pocket. I turned it on and started to look around, there was from the looks of it bones but I could not care for it not right now I have to get to the end I must. I got up and started to walk but as I went farther on I started to get weaker and tired, taking deeper breaths at a time I found myself collapsing onto the ground. I woke up in the same place but missing something I felt around and noticed something was gone It was my lighter my only source of light and it’s gone great. Getting up I was still a little woozy but I had to get to the end that was all. I walked further down and heard more noises they seemed to be all around me now. I scream, get away I don’t deserve this none of this get away from me. I quickly turned around and caught a glimpse of what I was fighting. It was no human nor was it a monster but yet it was me, I was fighting myself, but how could this be, I’m standing right here flesh and all, then I started having flashes of my little girl playing on the swings when I had just left her there without thinking and went on my search. Why am I not crying I should be crying but I still have that erg to get to the end of the street but why. Then a glimpse of my husband crying on the bed unable to find me worried but I don’t care. It went black pitch dark the kind of dark that felt like it would swallow you whole. I started to walk straight and finally got onto the right course again. It went on for about another hour but then something sharp went into my skin and all I could feel, was pain I turned and felt around it was a hook sticking out of my skin then all of a sudden it got ripped out of me blood went flying through the air, I fell to my knees with tears in my eyes crying for my own life. Then everything went blank. Now I am here forever, and forever here I will stay, I do know that I made it the farthest and I did find something that I did not want to know, I was just the same as any criminal, no feelings, no pain, but frightened. I can tell u how I died sharp teeth dug deep into my flesh ripping tearing at it like it was paper, blood fell to the ground like rain on a cloudy day. After that I was burnet, but not fast, very slowly like I was being cooked, but ounce they were done doing that they untied me and I felt like I was falling deep into the earth, but it was only my head spinning from the pain. They poured salt into my cuts and rubbed them real ruff, also making sure I was screaming. After they were done with that they just tossed me like I was nothing to them anymore. Know that I am here for the rest of my life I now see why no one has ever gottin to the end, because there is no end. The only advise I give to others that try is don’t go down the street if your not willing to pay the price with your life. I know I wasn’t.

( on the news) women disappears today family at a loss of where she could be, husband and daughter morn for there lost one.

 


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Great story hope you keep writing loved it.!!

2008-06-18 16:21:44


*gasp gasp gasp* its.. so sad!!! and horrible!!! i mean,its great but soooo.. i dunno wat to say.. you get the point. its just.. i could cry!

2008-06-14 11:06:25


Great


2008-06-12 12:20:10


the ending was really something but it was really good all together

2008-06-11 13:16:34


plz leave your comments at the end thank you.

2008-06-09 11:16:22


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