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'BoU'; "Birth of Ultra", is or has many unique features. My question has left me in sort of a slump and I need all of your help, advice or comfort wise. Many people can't comprehend my story or storyline, it was meant for teenagers and up. What do I need to do to make it more readable?

Realism is the most important part in a story, next to irony.  The unpredictable is the most entertaining, life is the same.  If we all knew what was coming, we would all be bored out of our skulls. Concern yourself... with what is real and what is not.  Now consider that with ...

My life has been full of betrayals.  strangers, friends, best friends, and even my closest family.  All due to their right of mind, self justice.  I've even betrayed myself. suicide, robbing a bank, joining a gang, or killing someone seems pointless in my mind.  Even with ...

   For anyone reading my very graphic story.  I should have my 1st chapter out within 2 days.  If you want more info on the novel, check the link below and sort your way to the 3rd story area.    This is like a Final Fantasy story.  I've been researhing...

Some people say I'm a child trapped in an Adult's body.  I have the knowledge, but I just give off that air about me.  I like talking all comedy like, especially when people are cynical or just want to have fun.  When the time I get actually serious is when someone to me with a pr...

Birth of Ultra:   Sneak Peek Chapter 5:   Omnilot Revealed               Upon reaching the hidden gate of Omnilot, Nexious smashes these doors down and pummels the opposition with his staff.   U...

Birth of Ultra:   Sneak Peek Chapter 4:   Enough’s Enough               As from leaving from Nexious’ hidden fortress, Aurora and the others go into battle when Nexious uncovers the many h...