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Final Fantasy Wise
Poll: Final Fantasy Wise
'BoU'; "Birth of Ultra", is or has many unique features. My question has left me in sort of a slump and I need all of your help, advice or comfort wise. Many people can't comprehend my story or storyline, it was meant for teenagers and up. What do I need to do to make it more readable?
You use too many long words.
I can't understand the opening.
The words are spiraling out of control; give a hint.
The story is readable to my knowledge.
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The story is readable, don't worry.
SEBSTUDIO
2008-01-05 02:00:19
Fantastic !!!
DARKHOTTIE06
2008-01-03 21:49:06
I agree with my sis, herself. But I say your writing is GREAT!!!! ^-^
THANHNGUYEN
2008-01-03 08:34:36
Its readable.dont be so hard on yourself.some people have relentless taskmakers in our heads.tell them to take a hike.
SAKURAYOTSUBA
2008-01-02 16:33:21
I don't think you should worry about it , If you can read it and understand it yourself. You should write how you speak. Your thinking to hard about it.
KACKITS
2008-01-02 14:27:48
y do you think there is something wrong with ur writing? u need to be happy that you can even write at all.
ANIMA13
2008-01-01 23:19:53
... nothing wrong at all my friend..
DUO214
2007-12-31 16:50:39
whats wrong with ur writing?? This poll has got me baffled :D
FOURTHWONDER
2007-12-30 12:31:29
ur a good writer.......i understand it.........keep up the good work......*pop*
HITZUGAYA
2007-12-30 00:56:41
ur an awesome writer idk why u would want to change things...well i geuss for yunger ppl that don't understand or can't comprehend teen and up vocab maybe u should use words they can comprehend but urwriting is awesome
IMISSEDYOU
2007-12-29 19:24:33
I've decided for now to demonstrate the scenario in the opening, catch it there. If there is any other further confusion, please ask.
3TREESLASH
2007-12-28 13:07:09
You can write very well. But only for some words i don't understand. I'm still learning so, i'll work hard too..Anyway, you're really a good writer. Keep up the good work!! ^^ *pop*
JUCHAN
2007-12-27 23:42:09
*POP*
SHIELD
2007-12-27 23:12:14
seems fine- its easy to understand
DARKSWORDZ
2007-12-27 21:26:50
Hmm....maybe you could aim for simple words that all ages could understand. You know, common words used daily by everyone. (Unless that word is not necessary to be changed.) Basically, just keep things simple and explain it little by little if necessary for others to comprehend your story or storyline.
HERSELF
2007-12-27 19:15:31