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invisible band

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invisible band

 

fighting, falling

             like a depressant former lover,

                          striving to make it thorough with little mercy he has.....

crawling, bleeding

              like a soldier,

                           holding onto the little life he has......

forever & ever,

               never & ever

                             like an invisible silver band around his finger.....

difficult to remove,

               but wishes to show itself.....

to make it seen by the world,  

                that this emotion truly exists........


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yeah, another poem. but this my brother's work....he left for basic a month ago and i had kinda helped him write this... please comment! =]

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that's really good!

19.09.2007 10:53 PM


You really have talent.... I like it so much........

28.08.2007 11:58 AM


I like it!

23.08.2007 03:16 AM


wow i love it good job

14.08.2007 05:05 AM


its really good!!

13.08.2007 11:51 PM


this is really good*speechless*pop*

13.08.2007 08:48 PM


OH...can I cry now? *cries* So good.

13.08.2007 08:40 PM


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