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fighting, falling
like a depressant former lover,
striving to make it thorough with little mercy he has.....
crawling, bleeding
like a soldier,
holding onto the little life he has......
forever & ever,
never & ever
like an invisible silver band around his finger.....
difficult to remove,
but wishes to show itself.....
to make it seen by the world,
that this emotion truly exists........
that's really good!
You really have talent.... I like it so much........
I like it!
wow i love it good job
its really good!!
this is really good*speechless*pop*
OH...can I cry now? *cries* So good.
yeah, another poem. but this my brother's work....he left for basic a month ago and i had kinda helped him write this... please comment! =]