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As the Blood Runs Down

When you open your eyes

I'll have lost my disguise

And it will be too late for you

 

You'll see how my eyes glow

And everything you didn't know

Will be true

 

And as the blood runs down

And you'll look like a clown

You'll see all the things

You've done to me

You will see what I've become

And know what you have done

I'll be free

 

Time is burning far away

And there is nothing you can say

Anymore

 

All the lies that you told

This has gotten really old

It's a bore

 

And as the blood runs down

You won't hear a sound

You'll see all the things

I've done to me

You will know how I loved

How I've pushed and I've shoved

You'll be free

 

Free from this life

Free from these strifes

But I can never be

 

You were rough and cold

And now I'll grow old

All alone!

 

And as the blood runs down

And you'll look like a clown

You'll see all the things

You've done to me

You will see what I've become

And know what you have done

I'll be free

 

And as the blood runs down

You won't hear a sound

You'll see all the things

I've done to me

You will know how I loved

How I've pushed and I've shoved

You'll be free

 

You'll be free

You'll be free...


Some awesome lyrics I just came up with. Gots any advice? Stuff to make it better, or a different title?

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good idea... i'll have to think on that. good title idea though

2008-07-31 16:37:07


Free maybe as a title. maybe not i'm not that good at coming up with names. i like.

2008-07-25 16:26:42


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