Tricked
How did we end up here
Now the end is near
We just hit the water and it is ice cold
I think to myself in my last seconds how did this unfold
He was mad
I was sad
We were tricked into it as I thought to myself
There is no way he could have killed all the people that I cared for
All he wanted was love no less or no more
He thought I killed his best friend
I guess it doesn’t matter since this is the very end
Here is the last chapter in our life
I thought he killed everyone I cared for so I stabbed him with a knife
He also stabbed me with I knife
Then he grabbed me and said now is the end of our life
Then we fell and saw all of them looking down on him and me
We did not shed a tear or cry because there was no reason for us to be
He looked at me with kind eyes and said im sorry and goodbye
Everything started to grow dark but we were at peace and then we finally die
Tell me what you think please
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I like it.I liked how u started it.
ALOYSIOUS
2008-03-13 15:34:18
wow. pretty cool.
PUNKGIRL1357
2007-12-08 08:53:03
i love it!
THEDREAMER
2007-11-14 19:02:44
it was good, I liked it
WATERLILLYRED16
2007-10-22 19:54:35
So sad but really good!!!
DEMON9
2007-10-11 12:46:02
so sad but at least they found peace its a beautiful poem
MINA237
2007-10-09 23:46:04
i really like, it's really good.
BUTTERFLYSINS
2007-10-09 17:21:22
oh wow
ESONO
2007-10-09 12:42:04
wow...so deep and...disturbing...
OXRAVENOXONIGHTWINGXO
2007-10-09 11:39:21
Wow... That's deep...
DELUSIAH
2007-10-05 20:24:17
I can seriously relate that, it sounds like what happend to Katori, with couple problems.hehehe It was great.^^0
KATORIOFTHESAND
2007-10-05 13:40:32
Very good, liked it from start to finish, keep writing. : )
GOTHWST
2007-10-04 15:56:34