I wish
I wish you would die and I hate you
Meet me here and you better come to
That’s what I said to him because we had just fought
My mind was lost in my thought
That he had cheated on me then I found out that’s it wasn’t true
I was relived and happy too
I was going to apologize to him and we were supposed to have met
At the tower but the sun started to set
I waited but he never showed
It was raining and very cold
So I decide to go home alone
Then when I got home I heard the phone
I answered then I screamed this is a trick
The my heart felt like it didn’t even tick
Then I knew
That my wish had came true
I started to cry
Then I screamed why!
Then two weeks later I was crying
I felt like my soul and heart were dying
While I watched his casket go into the ground
No one even made a sound
I set there alone saying why……
Why did you have to die
An leave me here all alone
With no soul and a heart of stone
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awww.....how sad....but very good!
THEDREAMER
2007-11-14 18:59:32
It's full of sadness and anger.
ALOYSIOUS
2007-11-14 08:32:04
You're amazing!
LUCIACHAN
2007-11-13 13:59:33
if ive said it once ive said it again, nicely done =)
DARKWINGXX
2007-10-28 12:32:37
As they say. You are very good. I wish I could write beautiful poems expressing what I feel. And what me and others experienced.
KRIZZIA1KANE
2007-10-10 03:09:58
u really are (agreeing with comment below . . . by the way) u r! u r!
MINA237
2007-10-09 23:43:15
You are very good at writing poems!! ^_^
EMPTYHEARTGIRL
2007-10-09 13:15:02
oh my so good *pop*
ESONO
2007-10-09 12:54:19
Awww...THat's so sad, good but sad, and true in way. That's why there's that saying "The human tounge speaks life or death" I presume.^^
KATORIOFTHESAND
2007-10-05 13:43:12
Very good, loved the ending, keep writing.
GOTHWST
2007-10-04 15:58:40