ART + LIFE
My only Love Poem
I was walking in the mall
It was around when the leaves start to fall
I was walking the I stopped then I saw his eyes
The were staring straight at me to my surprise
Such kind eyes so nice too see
I looked and smiled at him because I knew he was looking at me
I got scared and started to run fast
I knew the relationship would never last
But then he grabbed my arm
But I knew he wasn’t going to do any harm
Then we started to walk away together
We knew that our love would last forever
Drew dared me to wirte a love and happy poem. Well Drew I guess I won. LOL
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wow i really liked this one
BROISE
2008-08-01 16:47:44
Aww, I love it! This ones happier then the last love one.^^ I love it!
KATORIOFTHESAND
2008-05-28 13:49:53
i like it....
HITZUGAYA
2008-01-16 01:46:48
It actually sweet/not bad
HINATA1313
2007-12-18 11:22:41
not bad :)
PURESKILLZ
2007-11-20 19:50:48
I love this poem!
ALOYSIOUS
2007-11-14 08:28:51
awww...i love it!
THEDREAMER
2007-11-12 13:59:06
awwwww!!! how sweet, love at first sight, Keep writing! : )
GOTHWST
2007-10-28 18:22:57
only you can make such a nice poem =)
DARKWINGXX
2007-10-28 12:30:05
i love it. =]
SLAUGHTERLIME
2007-10-24 12:51:17
Fright poem.
LUCIACHAN
2007-10-22 13:26:49
Nice poem!!! Its so sweet.
DEMON9
2007-10-21 07:11:41
thats not bad (betttr than mine haha)
QUINCY77
2007-10-14 01:43:24
Sweet Poem
MANGALORD1
2007-10-11 18:49:15
AW that wuz nice
VATOSTIGER
2007-10-11 16:38:11