ART + LIFE
A Fight
He was the one she loved
Always there when she needed a hug
She could say anything to him they were best friends
Till the very end
When things started to change and started to fade away
She had wished every thing would stay the same like it was yesterday
But things were never the same after the fight
They were mad there was no sight
Of what was about to happen when he got in his car
A man came up to the door you could hear her scream from afar
Then she said maybe if we wouldn’t have had a fight
Maybe just maybe he might…….
She mumbled to him while she cried
She said he maybe wouldn’t have drowned and died
Hope you like this one please tell me what you think.
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I love it!!!
DEMON9
2008-07-02 11:07:03
wow very touching ^.^
XXMURDERDOLLXX
2007-12-28 22:06:00
That was good.
HINATA1313
2007-12-18 11:06:05
nice make more
GOTHDUDETWO
2007-12-15 21:24:19
its rerally good you've a knack for ryming i love poetry too but i dont write it who'se your farorite poet? (aside from yourself of course)
IVYSUAAKO
2007-12-15 17:35:37
cool sounds like something that i would write
NARUTOS1STFANGURL
2007-12-07 20:55:40
Too fright.
LUCIACHAN
2007-12-03 13:01:36
awww....its sooo soad but very good!
THEDREAMER
2007-11-12 13:53:37
Very good, keep writing. : )
GOTHWST
2007-10-28 18:27:47
Very good, keep writing. : )
GOTHWST
2007-10-28 18:27:47
Very good, keep writing. : )
GOTHWST
2007-10-28 18:27:03
Very good, keep writing. : )
GOTHWST
2007-10-28 18:26:54
i loved it, 2 thumbs up =)
DARKWINGXX
2007-10-28 12:30:52
Awsome!!! Its so sad.
DEMON9
2007-10-21 07:09:56
love it
VATOSTIGER
2007-10-11 16:39:57