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Questions Unanswered

Is it wrong to fantasize,

That you love me as i love you?

Ist it wrong to dream the dreams,

Where loving me is all you do?

Should i face reality,

And just accept my darkened fate?

Should i stop hoping for the day,

When love will enter through heart's gate?

Should i end my feelings though,

Thought alone casts my heart to the street?

Should i give up on unrequitted love,

for i know you will never love me?


I wrote this awhile ago, but this poem still haunts me. Please leave comments. I do like to know what people think about my work

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 Added 2008-03-14 05:20:36
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my bad!! i meant to rate it five!! ^_^ it's a nice poem!!

MEGACYBERMAN


2008-05-20 16:58:23


It not wrong to keep wanting to be loved

AEONDRAGON


2008-04-23 23:22:29


Aaawww! ='( I feel the same way.... The I liked left me, and hasn't even told me that he left. I'm so alone! ='(

PINKFLAME23150


2008-03-21 10:26:46


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