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confusion pg 3 and 4

i slumped down into a ball as the door closed behind me.´´why?´´i bit my lip´´WHY?´´i bit it harder so much so it started to bleed.but somehow the soft pain made it better.made me not think so much.it was better because i was trying to stop the bleeding.

i got up and wet toward the window,i stared out into the dark street of my childhood.

my lip began to bleed again and  again i started to suck on it.and as the nasty taste of rust and salt entered my body through th blood i understood.

i sood on the toilet ready to lift myself up to windo sill when something startled me.

´´diana are you okay in there?´´

´´i´m sorry no need to worry over me,i will not get flushed down the toilet.´´i said t the stupid guard standing outside possibly ith her ear to the door.

i was on the window ready to jump.´´on the count of three.´´

´´1´´i took a breath.´´2´´i was halph way out.´´3´´and i let go.

the cold wnd felt nice against my warm skin...i opened my eyes and what i saw aproaching made me close them again.

´´i´m gonna di-´´

 

 


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wow now that was short and odd but i liked it you should do a emix and make it longer and more detailed so people can know who she is he brother her parents what the hospital looked like...... you've really got something just give it more

2007-11-10 11:25:08


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