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Do I Love You?

A song that I wrote for my baby

"Do I Love You"

Beyond the shadow of a doubt,
As the mighty river flows,
As the meadow gale plays,
With the wind on summer days.

About as deep as deep can go,
From the canyons to the sky,
Like a mother as she cares,
For the baby that she bears.

Do I love you? Don't you know by now?
Do I love you? Must I show you how?
Do I love you? Do I have to say?
Do I love you? Yes in every way.

About as sacred as a hymn,
And a bible full of prayers,
From a whisper to a roar,
Very much and even more.

Let me show it with my eyes,
And I'll share it with the night,
If in death the Lord is kind,
You'll be the last thing on my mind.

Do I love you? Don't you know by now?
Do I love you, Must I show you how?
Do I love you? Do I have to say?
Do I love you? Yes in every way

--DarkGuyver718

 

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Oh will you tell who this was for? Just curious!!

2007-09-08 20:59:57


Looks like you are quit the player!!! gezzz you got girls fighting over who you wrote this peom for. So they not get that this is online and well A REAL RELATIONSHIP is in the real world and not online. *sigh*

2007-09-08 20:58:21


Wow.... my comments are so full of drama *grabs popcorn* Leave some more people! This is better than an episode of The Young and Restless!

2007-09-05 14:41:53


well i guess its the truth that ur dating more than one gurl. so i guess puttin my trust in u was a bad thing. and i thought that i truly luvd u. how stupid of me. i guess everything u said to me was i lie.

2007-08-30 13:20:52


That's deep, keep it up!

2007-08-27 15:47:56


oh man joshua you really now how to play it off so wo did yo uwrite this one for cause i mean you have so many girls telling you that they love you and i just dont now anymore tell me the trut how did you really feel about me i mean i now you had a few other girls cause one found me and asked me if i was still with you i said yes and she told me that you said that you had thre other girls and did not need her and that you never really cared for me so tell me the truth

2007-08-25 23:21:27


wow that was so so so sweet!!!!!!!!!^_^

2007-08-06 16:36:10


wow. dude u have alot of girls!! ^__^'

2007-07-23 09:55:17


*awe* it was soo sweet.I take it back u do have some talient

2007-07-14 09:43:28


aww!!!!! i donno wut 2 say.....i just luv it n i luv u 2.

2007-07-13 10:09:25


It's so cool!Who did you write it for?

2007-07-12 15:30:14


Its cool but did you make it on your own? do you sing?

2007-07-09 20:52:45


Aw, that is so sweet! Ur a very good poet at that too!^_^ I love it!*hugs u and kisses u* I love you so very much Daddykins! Ur so wonderful!

2007-07-09 20:34:22


awwww babes that is the sweetest thing ever!! *kisses u* i love u sooooo much

2007-07-09 20:14:54


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