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(Pome)"First Love"

If  I  could  paint,

I'd  paint  a  picture  of  you,

with  eyes  that  sparkle,

like  a  diamond  in  the  pale  moonlight,

and  a  smile

that  warms  my  heart  like  the  sun.

I'd  paint  the  rainbow  as  a  backdrop,

and  us  as  the  main  plot.

In  the  garden  of  edan,

where  love  and  joy  are  bountiful,

troubles  cease  to  tread.......

Here  we'll  make  love

to  the  sound  of  music,

oblivious  to  our  surroundings,

as  we  explore  the  unexplorables,

and  like  Adam  and  Eve,

take  the  fruit  of  the  forbidden.


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Tags: first,  love,  forbidden  Added 2008-02-06 18:33:56
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wow its great =D

NITABABE


2008-02-26 14:48:17


thanks:-)

DRAGON37


2008-02-08 15:14:11


wow,I like this one.

SPIRITED23


2008-02-06 19:22:28


oooooo so imaginative, love your choice of words and descriptions o.O ^_^

MARYHARMONIUM


2008-02-06 18:39:59


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