IN HER DREAMS,this is not a love story
She stood on a distant hillside, her silhouette outlined by the eerte moonlight.I moved toward her, but my body felt sluggish, weighted down. Still, I dragged my feet forward, step by step, inch by inch. Ihad to talk to her.
I drew closer. I could see her hair swaying in the wind. She stood with her back to me. Slowly,her details were revealed in the crimson moonlight. She wore an evening dress made of slik, but it was tattered and torn. Her arms and legs covered with wounds.Even so, was still really beauitful.
I finally stood close enough to touch her. Iextended my hand to tap her shoulder, but as I did, a sudden gust of wind scattered a tornado of rose petals throught the air. She slowiy turned toward me. Blood-streaked tears ran down her face.
I tried to speak,to scream,but no sound escaped my throat as I found myself staring at my own frightening mirror image......
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This is awsome dude! I wish I can write kool stories, but I skipped school. Lmao.
FUNNYONE
2008-07-26 10:40:24
wow... It was... I can't even find the words... Amazing is such an understatement...
EMOLILWOLFIE
2008-04-16 13:45:10
that really sucked me in and i could imagine everything soo clearly
RAINBOWEYEZ
2008-03-30 23:36:30
i love your writing skills, technics. your so talented. love love your stories. and i love you!!
XOKIKIXO14
2007-11-01 15:30:27
your a really good writer....
KRAZY13ROSE
2007-10-31 13:33:23
my life is like yours i understand u i hope u understand me
KITTYPIE
2007-10-16 10:00:14
i makes me feel as if i've seen a dream like it before, your very good at writing..
COSMICSTAR
2007-09-27 18:21:43
very beautifully written, i loved it
SASUKEBLOSSOM
2007-09-27 17:05:06
ahh that sounded so sad, but im a sucker for people, i have those kinda issues and the person in the thingy i wish i could see him happy, but ignoring the fact that its not actually a real person *flushed it out of head* ok now as for the writing wow that was really good ivan, i am impressed i really like it ha ha i mean you made me feel sad good jobby, sorry about this i have issues remember
CHIBIDARKNESS
2007-09-25 22:57:06
wwooww uhmazing..i wish i could write like that.hhmm maybe i could but nothin as deep or awesome as ur writing.
LADYVAMPIRESS214
2007-09-16 19:02:01
thats awsome
GAARASLOVELYLADY
2007-09-14 21:58:56
Wow this is deep, but very very good! ^^
MIKOPWNS101
2007-09-14 05:26:18
wow!!!!! it is soooooo awesome!!!!! i love it!!!!! u r the coolest guy ever!!!!
SAKURAPANDACHAN
2007-09-13 05:58:51
wow, that good--really good! can i have your autograph??
MIZZANONYMOUS
2007-09-09 17:07:25
i love it ....i see the same blood-red moon sometimes LORDSAUON doesnt know what he/she is talking about.I think u should write a book ,u inspired me to write one 2 ill let u get a sneak-peek of it .......this digs deep in to my heart...I FOUND MY SELF STARING AT MY OWN FRIGHTENING MIRROR IMAGE.......lol
BERRYBUNNY11
2007-09-08 13:25:13