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It Wasn't Suppose To Be Like This (Chapter 9)

 

Talking”

 

Thoughts’

 

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, anything or anybody associated with it. I also don’t own any bands, songs, things or places I might make reference to. I only own the OC’s in here.

 

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Previously:

 

“Wow... I.... I thought she was going to murder him.” Kisame said in shock as he and Tobi swam over to the side where the others were.

 

The others just nodded before going back to conversing.

 

'D*mn it!' Kakuzu yelled in his head as he looked over to see that Deidara and Keitarin were laughing and splashing water at each other.

 

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“Oh my god! That was so awesome.” Excitedly exclaimed Keitarin as she climbed out of the giant pool.

 

“That was pretty fun, yeah.” Deidara said as he grabbed some towels and handed one to Keitarin.

 

Keitarin place the towel on a table next to her jacket and bag while she wringed the water out her clothes as best as she could. Grabbing the towel she wrapped it around her shoulders before sitting down on a chair. After Deidara dried himself off he took a seat next to Keitarin.

 

“You like swimming?” He asked while towel drying his hair.

 

“Mhmm. I used to swim alot as a little kid but not so much anymore. I should though. I love it. How about you?”

 

“Yeah. It's okay.”

 

She nodded and sunk further into the cushioned chair while watching Tobi annoy Kisame in the pool.

 

“How long have you guys known each other?”

 

“For a while, yeah. I think since middle school.”

 

“That's cool. The few ones back where I use to live I've known since about my freshman year. I didn't really have any other friends until then. So it was really surpising to me to find friends here as fast as I did.”

 

He looked at her in slight confusion “What do you mean?”

 

A smirk made its way onto her lips. “I have a tendency to snap over the smallest things. And sometimes I get kind of violent.” She told him as she scratched the back of her neck sheepishly.

 

“Really? I would've never guessed!” Came a sarcastic reply from him as he laughed slightly.

 

Ketairn just galred playfully then punched him in the arm.

 

“Ow. D*mn you punch hard for a girl, yeah.” He said while rubbing the spot she hit.

 

“Sissy.” She said while laughing.

 

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After hanging out at Kakuzu's house the day Keitarin and Sasori had gone back home while Deidara had gone to his own. Upon ariving home Keitarin had imedietly gone to take a shower then went to sleep. It was now six-thirty am and Keitarin blinked sleepily as the music from her alarm clock rang through the speakers. She dragged herself from out under the covers and headed down the stairs to the breakfast table waiting while her mom finished cooking.

 

Keitarin layed her head on the table and went back to sleep, snoring softly.

 

“You know. That's not very lady like, yeah.” Deidara told her as he grinned from his spot next to Sasori at the end of the table.

 

“Oh my God!” She exclaimed shooting up in shock. “Don't fricken scare me like that.”

 

“Nice hair.” Was his only response.

 

Furrowing her eyebrows in confusion she looked to the shiney surface of the refridgerator to see what he was talking about. Keitarins eyes went wide when she saw that her hair was all over the place and looked like some small animal nest. Shooting up from her seat she made a bolt for her room.

 

~twenty minutes later~

 

“Keitarin! Come down! Your breafast is getting cold!” Barubara shouted from the bottom of the stairs.

 

“I'm on my way down now!”

 

Walking back into the kitchen her hair was brushed and tied up into a pony-tails and instead of being in her pajamas she was now wearing black jeans and a red t-shirt that had “Avenged Sevenfold” written in black letters on the front.

 

“Keitarin, Sasori had to leave but Deidara waited behind for you. So eat quick and get going to school.” Her mom said as she walked out the door to head to work.

 

'Why would he do that? I know how to get to school.'

 

Glancing at the clock she decided to just skip eating that morning. As she ran out the door she saw Deidara sitting on the curb.

 

“Why did you wait for me? You didn't have to.”

 

Not really having an answer he just said “Let's go.” and walked off.

 

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Deidara was sitting in class and halfway tuneing out the teacher as he stared out the window. Looking away from the outside he saw Keitarin scribbleing down some notes in her notbook. He smirked and crumpled up a ball of paper then flicked it at her. Keitarin shifted slightly but didn't seem to really notice. He tried one more time and he got a reaction.

 

Turning around she looked around and then saw him smiling goofily. She huffed in annoyance and went back to her work. Grinning slightly he wrote something down on another piece of paper before flicking it at her.

 

Keitarin rolled her eyes in annoyance but couldn't help but smile when she felt another ball of paper hit her. She was about to push this one aside too when she saw him motion for her to open it.

 

Eat lunch with me.

 

After waiting a minute he saw he discreetly throw the note back.

 

You couldn't ask me this later?

 

Smirking again he threw it back again after writing a response.

 

Nope :P

 

Laughing slightly at the face sticking it's tounge out he drew she gained the attention of the teacher.

 

“So what's in that note that's more intresting than my class Miss Keitarin?” Asked Mr.Kakashi as he took away her note.

 

Keitarins eyes went wide and her cheeks got red in ebarrasment as she noticed everyone in the class was looking at her.

 

“Well. It looks like you two will be spending more time together than just at lunch. I'm giving you both detention.”

 

Keitarin banged her head on her desk in frustration but Deidara didn't seem to mind.

 

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“I am SO f*cking mad at you. ” Keitarin snapped at Deidara. She had tried to get ahold of him after class but he had bolted before she could.

 

“You're the one who wrote back, yeah. Anyway, what's the big deal? It's only ONE dentetion.” The blonde replied smugly.

 

“What was I suppose to do? It didn't seem like you were gonna leave me alone any time soon! And for your imformation I had something to do after school. ”

 

“Well it's all done now and there's nothing we can do to change it so just sit down.”

 

Huffing heavily she sat down in at the table with the rest of the group Deidara's always with. Keitarin glared venomously at Deidara as he sat there eating his lunch like he hadn't done anything.

 

“Glaring at me isn't going to fix anything etheir, yeah.”

 

Everyone there could have sworn they heard Keitarin growl slightly as got up from her seat.

 

“Hey! Where are you going?”he asked her.

 

“Away from you before I hurt you.” She bit out.

 

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“Come on. It wasn't that big of a deal, yeah. It was just ONE detention.” Deidara reasoned.

 

Ever since they had left the denention hall Keitarin had been giving Deidara the silent treatment and was now currently throwing her books into her bag angrily while acting like Deidara was not even there.

 

“What's your problem!? Stop acting like a b*tch and just tell me what was so important that you're being so moody over, yeah!” After saying that he relised he went to far.

 

She whipped around then punched him in the shoulder and had a hurt/angry look on her face then turned back around and walked off.

 

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Sasori, Kisame, Itachi, Hidan and Kakuzu watched as Deidara paced back in forth in the living room of Hidans home.

 

“What's got him so worked up?” Hidan asked the others.

 

Kisame leaned over and pretended to whisper, “He's just brooding because he got into a fight with his girlfriend.”

 

Deidara stopped his pacing and glared at Kisame as he said, “She is NOT my girlfriend. I would NEVER date someone like her.” Then stormed out of the room and began to walk to his own home where he could sort out his thoughts without being subjected to the comments of his supposed friends.

 

Deidara unlocked his front door then slammed it shut after walking in. No complaints about it being slammed were heard since nobody else was home. He stomped up into his room and dropped his backpack to the floor before flopping down on the bed.

 

 

'Why am I still worrying about this... It was all her fault to begin with. Not mine. SHE'S the one who laughed and got us busted by the teacher... And it was just ONE detention... She didn't have to f*uckin hit me.' He rubbed his shoulder in rememberance before going back to his thoughts 'D*mn she hits hard... She didn't have to throw such a b*tch fit... But I did kinda go to far... Maybe I should apologize... Wait... Why should I even care?...She over reacted. I have nothing to apologize for... But...' He finally ended the debate he was waging between himself and sighed.

 

Standing up he made his way to the door. He passed by a mirror before stepping out of his room and noticed his looks. His clothes were slightly wrinkled and his hair was a little messy. 'Eh. I look fine. I'm not trying to empress anybody.' He thought before stepping out of his room. Pausing in the hall way he thought again for a minute before going back into his room.

 

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Deidara now stood outside Keitarin's wearing a wrinkle free black sleevless shirt and black jeans. He smoothed down his now brushed hair then reached for the doorbell. Stepping back slightly from the door he once again debated with himself if he was making the right decision about what he was about to do. He didn't see any cars in the driveway which meant the parents probaly weren't home and he wouldn't have any interuptions... or someone to call the cops incase Keitarin got violent again... But hopefully she wouldn't since he wasn't there to try and stir up trouble. Deidara was about to do one thing he rarely did. He was going to apologize.

 

He heard a voice he didn't reconize talking to one he knew was Keitarins. Making a move to bolt he was to slow as a tall figure opened the door. The person who had opened the door was a average height male with short spikey black hair that had silver tips. Deidara's stoney blue eyes met his dark teal ones. Taking a moment to survey this new person Deidara noticed he had a punk look with his black shirt, tripp pants and black wirst cuffs.

 

“Who's at the door?” Keitarin called out as she came to stand next to the punk at the door. As soon as she saw she immidietly had an angry look on her face. But he didn't miss the quick flash of regret that went through her eyes.

 

“What?” She asked in a aggitated tone

 

“Can we talk for a minute, yeah?”

 

“...I guess...” She stepped past the person next to her and told him to wait inside while she talked. He looked between at Deidara for a second before shutting the door and leaving them alone.

 

They stood there in silence for a minute before Deidara was about to speak when Keitarin cut him off and shocked him with her words, “Look. I'm.... I'm not good at saying sorry but I am. I was part of the reason for getting us in trouble... I was just upset becaus I was suppose to meet some of my friends from my old neighborhood. So yeah.... I'm sorry for being that way I was... And for hitting you...”

 

Taking a moment to let her words sink in he began to feel slightly bad for thinking the way he did earlier. He took a deep breath to get ready to say what he came over to say, “I'm sorry too. I shouldn't have said to you what I said earlier, yeah... And I should have also waited to ask you about lunch after class...”

 

Keitarin had been looking away from him but turned and smiled slightly at him.

 

Deidara smiled back and spoke again, “Hey. How about this Saturday we -” “Keitarin? Are you coming back in?” The guy from earlier cut him off.

 

“Who's that?” Deidara asked as he had a weird emotion that he wasn't use to course through him.

 

Keitarin was about to intoduce him but he started talking before she could.

 

“I'm Ryou. Keitarins boyfriend.”

 

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A/N: Haha! So much drama!! lol. Anybody want to take a guess at what Deidara was feeling?? Hmmmm???? And what he was going to ask Keitarin??? And I bet y'all can't guess what's gonna happen next! Anyway, sorry about the WAY late update. I had writers block :-/ Along with family and friend problems. I also had to take a trip the urgent care (not a emergency room) AND a trip to the ER O_o my life sucks.... lol. *Siiiiiigh* anyway, please review. It insprires me :) And pops & clips make me think people actually ENJOY reading this.

 

Big thanks to nenekohana and koreanangel125 for insperation.

 

PS.~ Sorry for Deidara's out of character-ness at the end...


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I love it!!^w^

2008-02-23 10:38:15


wow!!! a shocker!!!! it shweet!!!! n rocks!!!!

2008-02-20 09:28:13


Good chapter! I haven't been on in about a month...

2008-02-16 20:37:23


not bad

2008-02-14 06:16:50


not bad

2008-02-13 10:25:06


O.Owow, surprisingXDi love this!!!!!!!!!!!me wants more!!!!!!!!!!

2008-02-09 23:02:35


LMBO!! I finished reading it when I was at work^.^ I LUV IT!!!! *gasp* Is dat my name up there?? XP I'm glad I was able 2 help u out^-^ I ca't wait till the next 1 comes out!! *pop* and *clip*

2008-02-06 20:18:55


i love it ^^. Cant wait to see what happens next

2008-02-05 16:36:42


keitarin sounds kinda like me and i loved it just keeps gettin better go u

2008-02-04 18:19:44


Nice turn of events I LOVE IT!!!

2008-02-04 14:17:19


*SINGSONG VOICE*HA,HA,HA,HA,HA!

2008-02-04 05:38:26


Oh, that's perfect. And so evil. MWA HA HA HA HA HA!!! ...Sorry. Great Chapter.

2008-02-04 01:01:46


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