IzumiN : Fiction - TOKYOPOP

Yesterday, words were not enough
Even if we pass each other, don't stop
I want to understand more.
Sometimes I want to be alone
Even as I journey, my heart is not content
And then I take notice of something
that's important to me.

Always, always
Days will not always go well, but do smile
The amount of joy I felt
With only the few words that you gave to me
Is what I will always remember.

Memories, on the way back in mid-winter
Footprints in the white snow
A warm feeling descends and builds
Someday, the time for us to part will come
Surely, we will still be friends.
For I can always feel you closer than anyone else.

Faraway, faraway
The future that I only saw shining is
there straight ahead, so come, we must go
That the wishes you longed for
Will most surely come true
Is what I will always believe in.

Always, always
Days will not always go well, but do smile
The amount of joy I felt
With only the few words that you gave to me.
Is what I will always remember

Faraway, faraway
The future that I only saw shining is
there straight ahead, so come, we must go
That the wishes you longed for
Will most surely come true
Is what I will always believe in .

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This is very good! I feel it conveyed the emotion very well...well done Izumi!

PANDASKEEVY

2008-04-11 18:10:23

Heh, I'll comment it again! This is nice poetry. It has depth, but not so much depth that it's infuriating. *throws a gold stariken* Rokusho, out.

GRINZOR

2008-01-13 06:56:15

I really enjoyed it. It was good... ~ann

ANNCHOEVE

2007-10-25 11:39:04

Very well written.

KAGOMEANDKIKYO

2007-10-22 23:38:56

Oh, lovely! From one poet to another, I loved it! nice job! :3

LIONCHICA5

2007-10-17 17:56:18

*Gulps* *inhales and exhales a few times* That....was....so....sad.....and....touching. TT_TT C, can't say anymore. *whips out tissue and dabs eyes* *pops*

9261993

2007-10-16 16:47:04