Review of "Storiz" by NicoleLover

Kawaiute's Rating: 3 of 5

Fellow Manga-ka here, Nicole's my name! If I say so myself, you are a rising star. A artist with a nice and neat theme and story-line. Giving so much mood to your manga, it was a must read! I love the characters, this includes their personalities, individuality, and appearance (so far), though there were those tiny white errors or non-improvements. Here's the calm critique: Once you've read the manga, you see changes or improvement with the visuality of appearances and posture. For example, the main character Alexandra, her eyes and hair changes. I just wish there was a little bit more spunk to her 'do. Like adding some flips to those bangs and ends. Secondly, If you like to write out your manga (in your own penmanship, like I) please, oh please write eligibly. Though if you cannot, try various programs that let you edit out your written version and replace it the "typed" version. It helps. (At the moment, I write my own, but my writing is neat- not to brag.) Last but not least, backgrounds. Goes the exact same with hand-written, or now, hand-drawn. Backgrounds are wonderful in any kind of manga/comic, but they not mandatory. They just look nice. So if you drawn out your own, make them look nice, or just use the programs (if programs are available to you). {I hope this didn't sound too harsh in the bit...} *.:ºKeep up the great work!º:.* Ai yours truly, ~Nicole~ (Love)