MANGA + COMICS
Sowilo
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this is my very uneducated attempt at a first manga chapter:D. It is a long running story to do with the chakra system and mythology. I entered it into the rising stars and no luck with it. I am entering again this year with a completely new story thats self contained I would appreciate any advice or pointers for entering this year.
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- POPS: 9
- PROFILE VIEWS: 628
- FANS: 32
- CLANS: 28
- GENDER: F
- LOCATION: IRL
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This is awsome can't see why you had no luck in the rising star thing *pop*
MANGAMANIACNAT
2008-07-06 04:44:15
I really like your artwork. However, there were a lot of spelling mistakes and I was a little confused about which order the dialogue was taking place in, but if you moved the speech bubbles and panels around a little this would fix it. Still very nice.
JZENNIFER
2008-05-02 09:22:58
yeah I got very slack at that point.....it's something i'm trying to get out of I'm trying to keep things consistant
KITTYNIPPZ
2008-04-30 03:52:54
its awesome but i noticed that pages 15-18 that for the background u dint use the perspective point for the background..but everything else its great!
DEMONSDEATHANARTIST
2008-04-29 13:51:40
totally pretty~! I envy your skills :P
YUYREN
2008-04-27 00:36:57
wow thanks for the comments I'm very new here so it's hard to get around I only just found this page now....:(. Thanks so much for the comments very helpful
KITTYNIPPZ
2008-04-25 17:05:36
i like the art and the story was interesting you just need to fix some of the pages and it will be great!!
TAYLORLYNHILDEBRAND
2008-04-21 07:46:52
the first two pages should catch the reader attention not just with beautiful pic but a good scenario, urs it a little mix up n tend to lose the main points
SUICIDOLLXP
2008-04-21 03:22:59
I think the pages are mixed up a bit...but I really liked it! the cover art, and the manga art is great! the story line is pretty cool, though you may want to slow it down a bit. Super cool! *pops*
DINAREVENGELORD
2008-04-19 08:42:12