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ADDED: 28.08.2007
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Forgive the sun who didn't shine.The sky had asked her in to dine.Forgive the stars that heard your wish.The moon prepared thier favorite dish.Forgive the rain for it's attack.The clouds have tears they can't hold back.Don't hate the birds'cause they are free. Don't envy all the things they see.Don't block the wind ,but hear it's cry.Or else that wind may pass you by.Forgive the storm it means no harm.Could not resist to show it's charm.Forgive the Earth that never turns. Don't hate the sun ,because too much burns.Life intends to to not cause pain. The flowers bloom from all the rain.The storm will come and it will pass.The sun that shines,it grows the grass.The wind it cannot help but cry.The stars at night light up the sky.Forgive the world in which we live.We'll all find peace if we forgive.
I like it. ^_^
3 words. I Love It.
thats really cool ^^
This is amazing! I love it! ^_^
this is the best poam i have seen yet .......
deep...............i wish i could be forgave
wow its prity good
......................your good *pop*
thats deep.....wow i love this poem
wow awsome job!
Very good again, wow the words flow so beautifully and lyrically almost.
wow, thats deep. but so true. why cant we all forgive?
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