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Deeper than Deep
Holding on tight
the earth startes to shake
and my heart startes to quake
the sky begins to dim
my world begins to spin
consantly being blinded
to the truth held within
how can i forgive these demons inside
im running around but theres no where to hide
my heart grows cold
and i start to weep
for the love which i can not keep
standing alone
for i am full grown
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Nice Ryhme scheme
i love poetry and you look like a good poet!
Its very good and I have been around long enough to see a lot of poems..your was very good.*pop*
Wow, this is really deep and profound. *pop*
.............awsome
This is Awsome & very deep *pop*
then pop it is. realy good stuff.
thts deep
It's very calm and I love rimes!!! *pop*
NICE *POP*
NICE *POP*
very nice, it's as if you are about to die for the one you love has just left you
nice n cool "pop"
Very deep *pop*
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thanks for eading if you like pops are nice