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Finding My Light

Over 600 years ago, I was born. My name is Raven Crow. Boye. And this is about finding my light. My light is my little sister. Her name is Marlien Valentine. We have differnet names but we are still blood sister. Along my quest I made friends and enemies. But who cares. All I want is my light. Whenever I 'm close to her my heart breakes down. And sometimes I can and can't take the pain.

See it all started by this guy wanting my hand in marriage. But my father said, "NO!". So by him saying this, he turned into a dragon or a demon. All he did was move his hand and my father flew across the yard. I was about to run to him but the man grabbed my arm and said, "You are my and you will be my slave for the rest of your life!'

 

... Next time,

What is going to happen to her father or about her? Is she going to spent the rest of her life with this man she dosen't even know? Next time and see you soon. Love you all who is reading this. And see you next time. :) ;)


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I liked it please write more.

2007-12-30 22:05:25


its good and interesting

2007-09-21 16:16:41


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