it is seem really good and it is a book that will give you some laughs and a kind of book that you want to read when you want something new....(and im not laughing at your book) i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and it is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MYHEARTISLOVED

2008-08-28 06:11:54

now this tokyo pop kind of book

BUNNNY

2008-08-27 17:36:44

I love the art. It's very clean. However, I do think that there is too much background sometimes and it's a bit overwhelming. The storyline is eh~ She's allowed to be her brother's valet because he doesn't want her to be alone in the house, but her dad seems to be around the house...? Like Daphne says, "She doesn't look so alone to me." I must say though, I enjoyed Daphne's hysterics. She's hilarious.

YULIAN

2008-08-25 09:58:26

This is good. I hope they make it into a manga.

LANVE

2008-08-21 12:20:08

it's good for a manga like that:3

HUZUKI

2008-08-20 20:23:32

This looks pretty cool so far :D cohesive plot and readable artwork! I like this one quite a bit. Daphne's father is awesome

RYAVEN

2008-08-18 11:26:11

it looks good i havent propely read it thoug

ASTRO98

2008-08-17 20:45:43

I really liked the bridge guardian and when the main character socked Daphne. Overall I wasn't sure that it really grabbed me or that it was my type of story but then I reread it a second time and decided that I definitely liked it and would follow it so I hope there is more in the future:).

HARUHI13007

2008-08-17 14:01:41

This is the first pilot I've read thus far that has completely grabbed me. I loved the art, the story line was pretty good, quite compelling and you had time to connect with the main character right away as hate other characters right away. Though some characters could have room for development and I relize theres only so many pages for pilot episode but the conversation with the father could have been better. This is a manga that I wouldn't mind following and reading more of.

LOCKDOWN1989

2008-08-17 09:50:36

It's a neet idea, I like it.

SHMINZI

2008-08-15 18:13:17

I agree with Natsuki.

TENKO

2008-08-13 15:23:36

It's a good start. I want to see what happens next.

MRCLIFF

2008-08-13 15:09:08

The story was okay and so was the art work.... If nothing else sounded good I'd probably buy it.

SILVERANG3L

2008-08-13 11:18:22

Well, first off, i love the story, the art is great and after reading it, i wanna read the rest of it. Its very interesting and i would definitely buy this one! I liked how when Daphne used magic, there was a little surprise as to what Minerva turned into, it adds a little twist into the story when Minerva's nemesis is a princess..

JESSIKINS

2008-08-13 09:02:42

Before I begin, I just want to say that I'm trying to keep my review as constructive and honest as possible. Your story is an interesting idea and your drawing it's half-bad. But, your characters don't seem to possess any depth whatsoever and I don't see any potentional for character development, because they already seem too static to survive even another chapter. And when you write a prologue annoucing that your story is going to explore the boundaries of good and evil, it's not a great idea to suddenly leap into a light'n'fluffy exposition. It's generic, uninteresting and jarring. I honestly would never buy this. I did like the snakes though.

NATSUKI89

2008-08-13 06:05:53