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Spectrum Eclipse - Chapter 1
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This is awesome.
Amazing. Every detail. I lvoed it and I hope to see more. It was so original and fantastic. You may as well be an inspiration to me. Thank you for adding another great piece to my life. I'm serious.
i loved the art and the story very interesting keep up the good work!
yaaaaa! that was really good keep up the good work! =]
That Was Awesome!! ^^ I Can't Wait To Read More ^^
well, i liked it! i'm not that great at critiquing unless i start writing long paragraphs which i'm sure you don't wanna hear because they're usually about minor details that don't matter. so i'll leave it at this. cool story!
The manga started and ended too fast in my opinion and I coudn't undertand it but I'm glad for the people who enjoyed it! I liked the drawings but I think you should draw the scenes out a bit more and explain a bit more not just launch straight in (unless your planning to do more as the book progresses?) Thanks for reading my comment xx
Yumiyahachiman - Thanks for the critique, I appreciate it! Storyline is hopefully going to improve as we go along, as well as pacing - I would have liked the battle scene to go on a lot longer and the next one definitely will. I'm drawing this manga to learn, so I appreciate your input! :]
Yay, awesome! I'm going to feature you on the Art main page!
That's some nice work you got there Great drawings, only a few anatomy faults. Storyline could use some work, work it out a bit more, still a little bit dull, your action scene against the demon was over in like 3 frames and a bit static. Hope you dont mind the objectif critique
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Spectrum Eclipse - Chapter 1: Taboo ~ ~ ~ YESS!! I finally got the Tokyopop manga submission process to work correctly. Now the pages are in order. ^___^ Please enjoy this first chapter, and stay tuned for the next!