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Bulletproof Part2.

I began to open my eyes and at first everything seemed so blurry, I looked around and noticed I was in a room, I stood up and noticed I had a terrible headache, and then it snapped. #50…where is he? I looked down on my armor and noticed a necklace hanging down from my neck, it was his dog tag. “darn you Zack.” I glanced down and saw a machine gun and I picked it up as I headed towards a door and kicked it down, it was still dark outside…darker than ever.

I headed towards the cliff that we were both supposed to jump and peered down when I finally arrived there. The whole place was on fire, there must’ve been an explosion, a huge one. There were billions of dead creatures, how did he manage to kill them all? Then I saw something that caught my eye…in the middle of the entire city, there was a huge pole and Zack was chained to it, “Zack!” I jumped down the Cliff and crossed the flames as I charged my way towards him passing all the dead creatures he had eliminated. I finally arrived near him…he was in poor condition, blood was dripping from his mouth and both of his wrists were strapped with chains which were connected to two trucks in the back of the pole, as if someone was trying to yank his arms off while he was unable to move since he was tied up to the pole with the chains.

“#50…talk to me…it’s an order soldier.” He gazed down at me and spoke as he smiled weekly, “hey…buddy.” “Who did this to you?” I commanded, “You proud of me man? I killed them all #49…except for one,” he said as he choked out blood. “Where did it go?” I asked. “Hey #49…when all this is over, you and me pal…we will tell stories of how we saved the world once to our children, how bout it #49?” he asked as a tear rolled down his eye…a tear of blood.

“Yeah…we will tell the whole world how you and I killed all of those bastards,” I smiled. Suddenly I felt something hit my whole body and I was tossed to the side also I saw a huge creature stab a long thick knife across Zack as it penetrated through his armor, pierced through his chest and carved into the pole he was chained to. Zack’s eyes widened for a second as he spit out blood and lifelessly dangled from the chains, he was dead. I quickly jumped up to my feet and stared with burning eyes at the murderer of Zack as a few tears dropped down my eyes, it didn’t look like the rest of the creatures; this one actually had armor, and a huge weapon, most likely a rocket launcher which was strapped around his back. This creature was twice the size of me and instead of a left arm it had a sword. “All you humans will suffer, you may have destroyed my army, but I will raise a new one as soon as im done with you…#49.”

            “You may have destroyed Sector Z, but it will be rebuild, you may have damaged the city, but it will be reconstructed, you may have destroyed the hearts of many, but they will mend, you killed my best friend, and you will pay for it with your life,” I said as I looked around and the flames was getting closer, and a ring of fire was formed around us. “Let’s make this a fair fight,” I suggested as I took my machine gun and tossed it to the side. “Let’s,” returned the creature as it took its huge bazooka and tossed it aside and we both charged towards each other and engaged in battle.

(17 years later)

Mars, Central Doctors Office

Doctor: Mrs. Vaughn, when did you declare you started to perceive that your son was dissimilar from the rest of society?
Mrs. Vaughn: Well Doctor…to tell you the truth, I always though he was a little different, all he talks about is war and death.
Doctor: You did state he could name every type of weapon from memory even if he hasn’t distinguished them in real life correct?
Mrs. Vaughn: Yes doctor…he’s only sixteen too, it’s as if he’s not even our son, he doesn’t even look like his father.
Doctor: I think I verbalize for the both of us when I say; you have a gifted son, be proud…plus he was the one that deactivated the bomb in our city Alzana.
Mrs. Vaughn: I know but…
Doctor: That will be all, ill see you tomorrow Mrs. Vaughn Goodnight.

Secret Experimental organization/ S.E.O:
Voice #1: How is our subject coming along?
Voice#2: impressive, just as enhanced as the original.
Voice#3: Its developmental features have been upgraded, he's reflect and weapon identification skills are off the charts, he's preparatory skills have been established and he has easily passed all the procedures, all we need to do is give it its memory chip.
Voice#4: What will we name it?
Voice#1: Replica Z


the Battle heats on.

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Cool...

2007-09-08 14:23:05


O_O wow that was really great... ur use of figurative language is great... i love the imagery.... ok im going * goes to read aprt three*

2007-09-02 16:57:02


awsome!!!

2007-08-24 13:54:16


that was good too. *goes to read part 3*

2007-08-22 12:21:37


I love this. Gotta say I'm hooked. Can't wait to read part 3. ^-^

2007-08-08 16:57:28


Let me know when Part 3's up. It might take me a while, but I'll get to it. This is amazing! ^_^

2007-08-05 11:13:01


SWEET! A little rust with the correct conventions but the story plot itself is AMAZING! It reminds me of Final Fantasy VII and VIII, too amazing to believe. You're an incredible dude!

2007-07-28 13:49:11


Thanks for letting me know part 2 was ready. Please let me know about part 3. Your story is really good.

2007-07-22 20:57:13


Thanks for reading my story. But your story was amazing. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next part.

2007-07-22 16:20:44


I like it. Hope to see more

2007-07-20 18:10:06


Keep up the good work! The story so far is awesome.

2007-07-20 17:40:35


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