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Inu Tsuzuki: Ch 6

~Gomen you guys for the long wait!! Maecat and I did this chappy together xD Welps heres the nxt chapter and hope u guys enjoy!~

 

When Tatsumi and Inu Tsuzuki arrived at Summon Burial, Watari and Hisoka were already their waiting for them. Tatsumi woke Inu Tsuzuki up before he drooled on Tatsumi's coat with a gentle shake. "Time to wake up Tsuzuki,” Tatsumi said gently. "w wah yeah" mumbled Inu Tsuzuki as he began to
stir from his sleep. "Where did you find him?" asked Watari while getting up from his chair. Tatsumi placed Inu Tsuzuki down on one of the tables and then said, " The Count kidnapped Tsuzuki and was trying to seduce him again." Tsuzuki looked down at the floor as his face turned a bright pink. He then pulled his shirt's
collar up to cover his left shoulders while the rest of his clothing sagged on his opposite side. Tatsumi, Hisoka and Watari stared at the now embarrassed, Tsuzuki. " Our only concern now is to figure out a way to change Tsuzuki back to normal" Tatsumi said as he gave a cold glare towards Watari’s direction. "Oh that reminds me Tatsumi..." Watari spoke, but then became nervous and hesitated to speak. "Watari, I suggest you tell us what’s going on, or else face the concequences that’ll send you to the recovery room in the burial’s medical clinic!” exclaimed Tatsumi in a foul tone, for he was in no mood to be fooled around with.

Watari takes a big gulp before attempting to share what he knows with the furious Tatsumi. Hisoka gave a little smirk. This situation had been too entertaining, seeing Watari swell up with fear over Tatsumi’s rage had made him want to laugh.  “Well, you see Tatsumi, while I was going over my potions in the lab, I realized that I had never produce this kind of potion before. After hours of searching, I finally found the bottle that contained potion” Watari spoke as he walked over to Tatsumi and handed him the empty bottle. “Hmm there seems to be an label on it.” Tatsumi spoke as he peered closer at the label. The effort he put into reading the label was no use, because it was covered in dust and grim. “Hisoka, could u hand me a handkerchief, and dampen it with a little water please?” Tatsumi asked politely. Within a few minutes, Hisoka was back and handed the dampened handkerchief to Tatsumi. He started to wipe up the dust and grim off the label, once it was done, he took a look at the words printed: ANIMAL POTION created by Dr. Sho. “Well I guess we solved our little mystery guys. Looking at this bottle, it seemed like it had been left out for ages, which weakened the true power of the potion, since it did not completely transform Tsuzuki into a dog” Tatsumi spoke as he glanced in Watari’s direction. “WHAT? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? I’m going to be stuck like this forever???” Inu Tsuzuki wailed as he shook his arms up and down like a mad man. With the entire racket he was producing, the table violently shook and soon lost its balance as it tipped over and squashed poor Inu Tsuzuki below it. Hisoka rushed over and lifted the table to see Tsuzuki plastered on the floor. “Tsuzuki! Are you alright?” Hisoka said with a hint of concern is his voice as he propped Tsuzuki up to his feet again. Tsuzuki stared in awe giving no reply but his eyes began to swell up in happy tears as hearts fluttered around his head. “H-Hisoka! You were concerned for me weren’t you?” Tsuzuki yelped as he began to inch closer toward Hisoka by the second. Tsuzuki then leaped up and gave Hisoka a big bear hug. “Nyuhh! What the heck are you doing? Get off of me you dog!!” Hisoka shouted as his face turned literally 3 shades of red. “Demo…Hisoka was worried about me for the first time!” Tsuzuki said with happiness as he hugs Hisoka tighter. “I told you to get off me didn’t I?” Hisoka shouts and hits Tsuzuki on the head. Tsuzuki fell o the ground with shock from the impact of Hisoka’s fist. “Don’t you dare get lovey-dovey on me, I only came over to check if you were still alive since the table fell over you, and plus, that will be the ONLY and LAST time I will do such a thing for you”, Hisoka said as his eyebrows crumpled up, showing his agitated expression and the slight redness of his cheeks from earlier.

Watari gave a sigh as he watched Hisoka and Tsuzuki brawl at each other. He then glanced at Tatsumi and immediately turned back because he had seen a death glare smudged on Tatsumi’s face. “Uhm, I guess I should be going, since I do have some researching to do on the antidote!” Watari said in panic as he dashed out the door. Tatsumi gave an exasperated sigh. “Will you two stop bickering? In the meantime, we should go check if Dr. Sho has an antidote”, Tatsumi announced. “Ill go search with you Tatsumi”, Hisoka said as he got up from the ground and walked towards Tatsumi. “Tsuzuki, you stay here, this place should be the safest for you to stay. I’ll lock the door so no one comes in and if Watari finds an antidote sooner than us, he’ll be the only one to access since he has the key,” Tatsumi explained to Tsuzuki as he and Hisoka head out the door once again. Tsuzuki sat by the desk and pondered. “Hmm…this seems to be familiar…I’m left behind again!” Tsuzuki pouts. “Oh well, I really hope I don’t get stuck in this form forever!” Tsuzuki said with a sad sigh.



This is a joint project Maecat and I are writing. *Story may contain some light shounen-ai (boy x boy content), If you dont like, then plz do not read the story

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omg your story is so pro i cant even write a story xp omg ya i cant wait till ch.7 good luck wiff and do ur best ^^ <3

2007-01-27 19:26:21


Ooh, interesting! You two are really doing well with this story! I have only one critisism, and that is maybe you should have more paragraphs with less sentences in them? But it isn't a big problem, I could read it fine. The spelling is great and there isn't a lot of repetition. There is a lot of character detail, plus everyone is *in* character, which is always an issue to take into account when doing fanfiction. But you two have pulled it off. So well done! I applaud you both! Poor Watari! I wouldn't want to hang about Tatsumi for too long either, I don't think! Hisoka was in the background for most of this chapter, but still manages to get ticked off at InuTsu-kun. And Tsuzuki himself... maybe you should keep him as a puppy forever....?*grins* I look forward to the next chapter!

2007-01-08 14:01:06


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