Shh!
Wait until they are gone, for I am going to tell you what I'm feeling.
Start breathing slowly, hold her close to my heart.
When i was a child, I looked up to her, when I grew up, she was replaced.
Now she still watching me, looking at me with dark and lonly eyes.
now, we still look at each other in the cold and rainy day, slowly i reach out to her to show her that I am hollow as they come.
then she moved frist, holds my hand and gentily placese my hand agenst her face, so cold, i thought i was going to be cold.
Then she shown me how cold a person can get, and so hollow that if I move she will fall apart.
I slowly and gentily pulled my hand back, then suddenly, she shatterd, then fades like ashes, but once i breath her in, she will be part of me forever.
shhh!
I want to say, I'm going crazy over you.



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it very deep but thats whats good about it. ;p.*pop*
BROKENHEART7
2006-11-01 12:33:06
but i love it :D yay
CHAINXMEMORIES2
2006-09-27 11:06:58
thats really good but u should put it in the fiction area because its more like a fiction
CHAINXMEMORIES2
2006-09-27 11:06:35
Wow
SADEYERAJAH
2006-09-26 22:59:59
super super deep! *pop*
JOKER9463
2006-09-26 22:52:12
oh wow deep this one is awesome, really kool!!!
FLYINGKIRBY
2006-09-26 22:32:29