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How I died

Mist fills the air around us

An eerie sound drifts inside your head

I float above the gravestone

That marks where we last met

And, yet, you still have the nerve

To ask me

How I died

 

It all began three years ago

When you and I first met and

I thought that you were the one

I believed that it was ment to be

That both of us could clearly see

The love between both you and me

 

But soon, I had realized

That I had not opened my eyes

To see the real you beneath that shallow shell

 

Mist fills the air around us

An eerie sound drifts inside your head

I float above the gravestone

That marks where we last met

And, yet, you still have the nerve

To ask me

How I died

 

It all turned wrong two years ago

As I began to walk home from school

I saw you in a dark alley,

With that tramp from history

 

It was then that I had realized

That you were not

Who I thought you could have been

 

Mist fills the air around us

An eerie sound drifts inside your head

I float above the gravestone

That marks where we last met

And, yet, you still have the nerve

To ask me

How I died

 

A year before this tragic day

Though it only seems like yesterday,

You and I had walked

Hand in hand down the street

You walked me into a dark alley

You told me to wait for you

And you left me all alone

 

I was blindfolded, so I could not see

That you were standing next to me,

Your cold hands grabbed my throat

And stabbed a knife through my heart

 

So I died in your hands,

And while you laughed at me,

Calling me pathetic and weak,

I cried for you,

Feeling sorry for you to be like this

So you are the reason I died!

 

So my ghostly hand appears on your shoulder

And I look into your eyes,

Though you cannot see me,

I can see you

And all I have to say,

Is that you, my friend,

Are the reason I died

 

Mist fills the air around us

An eerie sound drifts inside your head

I float above the gravestone

That marks where we last met

And, yet, you still have the nerve

To ask me

How I died

 

How I died


This story is actually a song that I wrote by myself. It's a dream a boy is having about his exgirlfriend, who was murdered right before his eyes. The boy has two personalities, which is how he saw it happen. The pictures are from random websites.

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Thanky you all very much!

2008-04-25 13:11:39


aww wow that was awesome

2008-04-25 12:49:38


wow! you should try putting this to music then send it to a record company! its that good!

2008-04-25 10:17:53


i love it

2008-04-25 07:00:15


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