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she sits there alone,
confused and hurt,
her hopes and dreams,
left somewhere in the dirt,
she sits and wonders why,
why is she hurting,
why does she cry?
she struggles through life,
almost a teenage mother,
knowing that somewhere out there,
her baby has a rapist for a father,
although her boyfriend loves her,
and offers to be her protection,
all she really want is love and affection,
her parents;argue everyday,
her father;non stop yelling,
her mother;constantly crying,
nothing is good,
no matter how much i give up,
nothing gets better,
so still i sit here crying,
looking at the problem,
continuously trying..
whoa, very intense! i liked it
that was breathtaking!i luved it,ur such a skilled writer,every poem is awesome.So deep and full of emotions!
hm oh that is so sad im so sorry you have to deal with all that you are so great you deserve better and you are really special ^^ so dont cry anymore you have people that love you ^^
its hard...this is a poem basically about me *sigh*
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! i love you sis! this makes me want to cry!
JAZZYJAZZ1213
25.08.2008 05:15 PM