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Jimmy (Part 2)

 Eventhough, the car was his parents, the sound of jingling keys never got his attention. As his parents walked through the door, he got up and walked out of his room and stood at the top of the stairs, waiting with silence.

"Jimmy, are you in there?," hismother said with a wondering yell.

Jimmy never said a word.He just stood by the steps, waiting. A minute later, Jimmy'sparents walked upstairs, but as soon as they reached the second tothelast step, they spotted Jimmy and jumped to him as if something terrible had happened. Later that night, Jimmy told them everything as tears raced down his cheeks.

"Jimmy, I'm not surprised." Jimmy's mother said angrily but sadly, in a way.

"I thought I told you notto go to that house anymore. You know those people eat what they are." Jimmy's father said calmly. "You know they are crazy. Not even the cops or the @$%# S.W.A.T. can defeat them." He continued.   


This one's gonna have to be short due to the time givin

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U build me up and then just leave me hanging...LOL just teasn' .... Ur good @ keepn' the readers interest!! Can't wait 2 read more...keep up the good work!! *pondering* who can't b defeated by the SWAT team MR.T maybe no it's spidey right!? C'mon tell me *pleading on hands and knees* Guess I can wait til' the next installment....*anime sweatdrop* lol....

2006-09-11 23:20:19


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