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sight of you

my eyes are closed

shut my mind out

away from the world

 

my hands are numb

so are my legs

i need to feel

 

my heart ached

i can hardly breathe

help me

i beg you please

 

my tear want to flow

but they wont go

i try to scream your name

no sound come out

i need you

 

you come to me

but i cant hear you

the anger over come me

like a forest engulfed in flames

my senses start to come back

my tears flow with rage

my heart beats faster with every pump of blood

i feel my hands and legs burn

my mind becomes aware of it's surroundings

 

my screams are heard

finally my eyes open

open to a wall

open to the sight of you

dead on the floor

or asleep in a corner

my heart slows down

mind numb again

tears heavily flow

eyes blind in a water wall

at the sight of you


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 Added 2008-07-14 15:29:44
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I agree but it is nice

DEADMOONCHILD


2008-07-29 16:36:25


needs more work

RIKKULOVER999


2008-07-17 17:42:04


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