jetseta
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jetseta
Last Login:2008-08-20 10:52:45
Views:17008
POPs:284
Fans:622
Clans:517
Gender:M
Age:17
Location:Private
jetseta's Profile
Real Name: tyron bryant
Member Since: 2006-09-10 13:45:20
Inspirations: dragonball z ,naruto, one piece, AIKI, and all Oh! Great! & katsura's work! Hey everybody that view my page please check out my manga "Gaijin"! I worked so hard on it. If u like it please pop and/or comment it thanks! p.s. read all the chapters if you didn't already enjoy!!
Occupation: manga artist
My Experience: Amateur
I create: Manga
Favorite Manga: Dragon Ball Z,Tenjho Tenge,AIKI, girls bravo, Air Gear, MBQ,One Piece,GALS,DNA^2,I''s, Zetman, video girl ai/len,etc...
Favorite Music: hip-hop,rap,R&B,soul,etc...
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Favorite Book:
Favorite Sport: basketball
Hobbies: drawing, seeing fights,
My Sites
http://www.tokyopop.com
http://www.myspace.com/jetseta..
Hi there! This here's Mino the mangaka, Minokaro Ashell!
Ohh! I get it now! Cover Image displays my manga icon picture! Now I don't have to worry about the blank cover again! Thank you so much buddy!
By the way, about your comics... You're getting better and better from chapters 1 - 6. Your artworks are improving, and I see your style's so much similar to Kishimoto's and Toriyama's. That's okay, but you should try to find your own style! That'd be great and awesome!
Not only that, the move's names are similar to Naruto's and DBZ's ones too. Try to change the names because others might think you're plagiarizing or something. But chapter 6 had been posted, so there's not much to do now but delete the current chapter 6 and re-posted a new one with different move's names. You don't have to do so if you don't want though.
Your manga needs more background effects called tones, such as centralizing lines, speed lines, etc.. The panels needs enlarging too, 'cause I couldn't see some of the artworks in them clearly. The texts are a bit small I couldn't read them as well.
In my manga version, the proper font size of the texts are 17 - 20 pt Comic Sans MS. If the balloons are smaller than the texts, use the Elliptical Marquee Tool (right-click on Rectangular Maquee Tool and choose Elliptical Marquee), then draw a big balloon. After that, click Edit -> Stroke -> 10 pt -> Color: Black. If some part of it is over the characters' pictures, erase it. Then you type the text. If the balloons are still smaller, use Edit -> Free Transform. Remember: you can only do Free Transform in a new Layer.
Overall, Your manga sure is amazing and wondrous! Your imagination is far beyond any other beginners! You really should continue writing Gaijin! I'm waiting for the chapter 7 to come!
Well, I think that's all for now. Before I leave, here it is... *pop* Okay then! Thank you! Enjoy!!
Oh yeah, about your manga. I'll read them when I have time, because I have a bunch of school assignments, homeworks, etc.. But I'll read them and pop/comment for sure!
I really appreciate you taking the time to view my story, Muse. Thank you. You can also view my new Tokyopop Pilot, "Cog" here: http://www.tokyopop.com/cog/tp_manga/1822121.html
TOUGALOVER77
09.08.2008 10:39 PM