jetseta : Manga - TOKYOPOP

i have to hand it to you your characters are very origional POP

MISHERU

2008-10-06 13:22:40

Kewl. Popped!

SANGUINESTAR

2008-08-23 19:02:52

Kewl. Popped!

SANGUINESTAR

2008-08-23 19:02:52

nice again

MUNJI

2008-08-23 06:52:18

Yeah - there are certainly LOTS of explosions! ^_^ Funny! I liked it! Just do't forget that backgrounds are a part of the action too!

TOUGALOVER77

2008-08-09 18:51:17

Your manga is just hella raw man, it takes me back to the good days of DBZ, basically what I'm saying is your manga is hot and show's how a fighting story is suppose to be.

ELMOSGANGSTAPRODIGY

2008-08-07 20:14:06

its... explosive...XD

VEROLINA

2008-08-06 06:45:34

super cool!*pop,clip*

DARKHOLLY656

2008-08-01 11:01:25

Oh, and it's cool to borrow another's style until you find your own, but try a few styles out and not just one. Other's may suit you more. I saw some Bleach mixed with your DBZ. And at points I was reminded of Gin Tama. I think you'd like Re:PLay. Also, try Snafu-Comics.com and click on the icon for Grim Tales, the creator is called Bleedman. You can find him on deviantart.com too under Bleedman, just type his username in the search engine on the site. Happy hunting and practice only improves your work!

THEPAPER

2008-07-28 20:22:57

Okie dokie. I've checked it out from chapter one and on. The first one, forgive my language (I swear like a dirty sailor when my mother's not around ^_^) but it was f*****g hard to read. You showed real improvement as the story progressed though, you even expanded to computer media, and I applaud you for making use of the fonts and colors. Tones are the best I think to bring out the character's environment and to give a little oomph to their actions. Just don't use them too much or you'll end up with a mess that no one can follow. And I would suggest a life drawing class. I'm sure you've probably heard that before but it's true none the less. Life Drawing (while awkward!) is good for teaching you structure and how things balance. If for whatever reason you cannot get into a life drawing class in the foreseeable future, get one of those little wood men that they sell in the craft's aisle at WalMart. It has a limited range of motion and poses but they're still helpful little things! Think of them as what is going on under the skin and you use them like a skeleton. Once you get that, all you have to do is draw the skin over them! Funness. I think you're trying to cram too much information onto each page. I remember Dragon Ball Z, and while he had a lot of panels sometimes, he didn't put too many words to each of them and pace your story. A good story is paced in such a way that the reader will take their time where time needs to be taken and they'll speed through scenes where speed enhances the experience. Sorry for taking up so much space! I'll go babble to someone else.

THEPAPER

2008-07-28 20:18:53

u improve everytime, but i can see if u b more patient u can do much much much better!

CHAZ1IT

2008-07-28 02:34:29