Wow, I'm honestly a little surprised to be featured on the front page. I'm very honored and I thank everyone who has been commenting and voting on my work. I do appreciate it!

I'd added some revisions to Chapter 1 of Twilight Chronicles-- mostly just removing the omniscient voice to keep it third person limited, from Gestalt's perspective. However, I did re-write the intro so that it might be more....compelling. I'm not entirely happy with it but hey, I'll let the readers be the judge of whether this version is better or not.

 I also made a small revision to the end of Chapter 4 to remove the omniscient that appeared there as well. It ends exactly the same as before, it is just Gestalt that thinks about Magic points instead of the narrator.

Again, thank you to Matt Nixon of Tokyopop and everyone else here in the community for selecting me as a 'Pop Star'!