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ADDED: 21.10.2006

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I'm popular?!
Wow, I'm honestly a little surprised to be featured on the front page. I'm very honored and I thank everyone who has been commenting and voting on my work. I do appreciate it!

I'd added some revisions to Chapter 1 of Twilight Chronicles-- mostly just removing the omniscient voice to keep it third person limited, from Gestalt's perspective. However, I did re-write the intro so that it might be more....compelling. I'm not entirely happy with it but hey, I'll let the readers be the judge of whether this version is better or not.

 I also made a small revision to the end of Chapter 4 to remove the omniscient that appeared there as well. It ends exactly the same as before, it is just Gestalt that thinks about Magic points instead of the narrator.

Again, thank you to Matt Nixon of Tokyopop and everyone else here in the community for selecting me as a 'Pop Star'!
Lani Garver

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......uh ha....-_-'

22.04.2007 08:47 PM


Congratulations for getting on the front page! You are very talented!!

27.11.2006 11:19 PM


congrats! ^_^

11.11.2006 09:10 PM


he he --congrats---- greatt story like the part where u added "beowulf" he he -famous looooooooooong poem

25.10.2006 03:12 AM


me thinking to myself: i'm speechless

24.10.2006 06:53 AM


No your not popular. No one knows who you are. Those 6,000+ people who have viwed you profile Don't Exist. Heh, But congrats.

24.10.2006 01:28 AM


congratulations, and i hope you would continue on with your story and new stories and everything...

23.10.2006 09:56 PM


Congrats! I love your story!

22.10.2006 09:03 PM


You are really cool. Thumbs up!

22.10.2006 01:39 AM


yaaay! i'm so happy! did you read my new story yet? its called the story before the end. i would really love your input on it!

21.10.2006 10:31 PM


Yes, congrdulations...

21.10.2006 06:10 PM


Congrats!! Great story by the way

21.10.2006 03:48 PM


congrats on being a popstar!!

21.10.2006 08:04 AM


congratulations! :D

21.10.2006 06:13 AM


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