when r u making chapter five i want to read it so bad, u are so awesome

ARI2010

08:30 PM, 08.22.2007

Jezz. 0_0

NINAUCHIHA

10:03 PM, 07.28.2007

Toonami Material ENEMAN i can see where your coming from but still... it seem's more like alot of this is based off of many different game's and or anime series, and he well, put it together, in his own spare time. I mean, its so well thought out, i really like reading it, plus alot of this story line is more like, a more creative one, except its in a sorta like novel format. So defently, if this become's a manga/novel i am so gonna freken buy it asap. Ill give this a 5 out of 5 because well, i just loved it, the suspence is awesome, i was so curious, to find out what happened i just cant stop reading! *P0P* God... you halfta hurry im dieing from the suspence i gotta know what happen's next!

SUPERNET2

03:29 AM, 07.22.2007

love it!!! this is really good!

SANDBLAK

06:49 AM, 04.27.2007

sw33t, im sending all these to my freinds, good luck getting it into a book or something, it would be awsome, definitly popular, i mean cmon, a patchwork teddy bear with an attitude, so cool! GOOD LUCK MAN!

FATKATBUYO

08:25 PM, 03.26.2007

this story is really great, cant wait for chapter 5. You should try to get this published into a book...its that good

AKARYUU14

12:39 PM, 03.06.2007

For the third time...it IS Toonami material...

ENEMAN

10:04 AM, 03.01.2007

Very well written. I am very pleased that you allowed me to read this. I am very picky about what I read and I read all of these tonight and just loved them. I hope you can continue to keep up this imagination of yours.

MELONYG87

05:20 PM, 02.04.2007

where is Rena? does she get captive by de goblins?

THEDEFEND

03:01 AM, 01.30.2007

This is probably the best story i have ever read that only has 4 chapters in it!

LADYAKANE

04:17 PM, 01.08.2007

whee!! that was fun! fall down....now! fall down before my mighty power! i feel sorry for Gestalt, does he have to marry her? he don't want to, but i guess you can't break your own wish. accidental or not. or can he?

SHADOWEDBEAUTY

06:14 PM, 11.29.2006

whee!! that was fun! fall down....now! fall down before my mighty power! i feel sorry for Gestalt, does he have to marry her? he don't want to, but i guess you can't break your own wish. accidental or not. or can he?

SHADOWEDBEAUTY

06:13 PM, 11.29.2006

just finished readin, propa awesome. hope it becomes a manga coz i'd buy it any day

DOYLIE

02:32 AM, 11.20.2006

Great story!! Thanks for telling me about it! You're a very talented writer. I can't wait until the next chapter.

HSKASATO

05:36 PM, 11.04.2006

uhm......what he said.

MAYGIRL

01:53 PM, 10.29.2006