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Taken by my mind
Confused by your lies
Yet I can't find
A way to compromise

Lost in myself
Burdened to the end
I can't get out
I don't need you as a friend

You and them all
Trickery defies
The way that I call
Your senseless lies

Stay away from me
I have yet to recall
an apology
for this all

Taken by your grasp
Dispising your lies
Yet i cannot find away
To break these ties


A poem I wrote cause of lies I've encountered by a few friends over the past year...Tell me what you think

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i like this poem...nice job

DUSKSTAR


2008-07-11 12:00:33


Thank you

KAGOMEANDKIKYO


2008-07-08 00:29:38


great job! i like this poem.

ROCKSTAR666


2008-07-07 20:02:12


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