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The perfect poem

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The perfect poem



why do we human hurt each other it's so very sad i want to help as many people that i can in this world ......before i die do i have to change my self just to go to heaven? why is this world so sad i wish i can save it but i can't the girl that i love so much does not see she is in so much pain and lost the souless look in her eyes but it seem that everytime i hold her in my arms she just don't feel me everytime i make love with her she don't feel the passion that i give her she don't care then she killed her self stab her self in the heart*crying* why why did u do it i love u so much and I'm left with darkness in my heart and soul why do ppl kill them self? god i beg of u please answer me why do ppl kill them self as it start to rain left in darkness
why does my heart hurt so much so this is what she felt to the point were she can no longer live or be love ever again i went back to her body and use the same knife to stab my self in my heart as i lay there dieing at last we are together forever.


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So great :) love it

06.07.2008 05:29 AM


love it!

08.06.2008 10:42 PM


Just the name of the poem matches it. One of the best yet.

29.05.2008 09:04 PM


romeo and juliet. very touchin. sad tho *pop*

16.04.2008 05:19 PM


WTF????? y the hell r u soooooooo gooooooooodddddddddd.............that doesnt make sense.......I LUV UR POEMS

28.03.2008 07:22 PM


this makes me wanna cry

26.03.2008 04:00 PM


omg! l'l-l'l*crying* that's an awesome peom! ur really good at this!!

25.03.2008 01:53 PM


its sad but it is so cool

19.03.2008 11:01 PM


F*** Keyohgi u need 2 stop writin sad poems nd stuff cos u goin 2 hav me in tears all the time. Ur really gud!!!!!

19.03.2008 09:22 PM


its sad *crys*

19.03.2008 02:22 PM


Wooooooow!!!!!!!!! You are the best poem writer EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!

18.03.2008 07:37 PM


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