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Poem # 30 This Happens Along the Way

the pursuit of happiness

is the search for a silhouette

of a man, paper thin

 

you look for the solution

but this journey to find your soul

makes you lose your way

 

your heart hardens

your mind is disillusioned

the things that mattered

no longer find their way

into your compassion

 

there is a hole in your heart

that was cut out

chiseled into hatred

this stone piece of you

is no longer part of you

 

in time

darkness enters this hole

hiding there

festering the old wounds

opening scabs

letting you bleed

 

you find your vision dimming

but you refuse to let your heart

be whole again

so you keep bleeding

 

and keep stumbling

as you lose your strength

your will to survive

 

and perhaps

just maybe you realize

and come to your senses

but it is too late

you succumb

to this fatal stubborness

 

your eyes roll back

your body falls down

cold crimson chills your back

as your head hits the ground

 

 

 


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i know what this is. only because when my best friends mother got cancer...right after her divorce (husband had been cheating) she lost the will to live. she withered away.... i loved her like a second mother. to Natalie- rest in peace, we all love you, miss you, and wish you well

2008-07-18 19:42:34


when the shock finally hits you. why not to bottle things up. very short lines, but i like this one. could use stronger vocab for imagry, but nice none the less.

2008-07-18 19:39:40


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