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Occassionally
occassionally
i love you
love you like the open seas
that in your wake lay flat as glass
not a ripple to disturb your perfectness
occassionally
i hate me
hate me because i love you
because i let you use
because ive fallen
and you wont let me up
occassionally
i hate me
because
occassionally
i love you
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So sweet and delicate like a rose, even in the gentle breeze petals may fall; sway, sway in the breeze and don't let go
this is very simple and very good. =D
it's good. you could make a song with this
^-^ This is very good.....and......a lil' sad. I think I noe a song dat might suit this poem....>.> maybe! XP *pop*
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i like it.....i love ur use of words..keep it up ^_^
Wow. this is a really powerful poem. It's not amazing just because of the way it's written,and the obvious talent either. It's liek you said, who doesn't feel like that some time in their life? It is really amazing.
omg i loved it write more pop/clip
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i wrote this and it just hit me i mean who doesnt feel like this sometime