i said it b4 and ill say it again.DEEP DUDE DEEP!defenit from the soul

READYSETDIE

11:07 AM, 05.09.2008

is this you writing poems?? sounds like its describing the hard work of a very concentrated person writing something that deals with hidden truths....hmm truthfully, idont exactly understand your poem ehehe but it gets you hooked and wandering what it means or refers to :) and im curious; please explain if posssible :) but its still really impressive writing

EMOAI

08:49 PM, 05.07.2008

the 1st thing that came 2 my mind was a person in my life that i have a huge disregard for bcuz of somethin they did to me but instead of being direct with that person by lashing out, i simply write a song about em u know keep it sublime lol i dont know if thats wats it actually about but thats wat i felt XD

ADDAARTIST

08:25 AM, 05.07.2008

thanx and no i dont mind if you put it on your blogs... as long as you dont start claimin it as urs ^^!jk

LIVI

07:56 AM, 05.05.2008

Love it, you have a certain flair for poetry!

WOLFLING

06:28 PM, 05.03.2008

i want it want it!! hehehe...HA HA HA HA (hit my head at wall *4) POp

KYO4KUSANAGI

09:53 PM, 05.02.2008

NNNNNIIIIIICCCCCCCEEEEEE LOVE IT!!!! MIND IF I PUT ON MY BLOGS??

DEATHFLOWER

04:38 PM, 05.02.2008

that was some deep poetry i love it post more!!!!!

SHADOWBLADE92

07:12 AM, 05.01.2008

thats really cule me likey big time.

1HURRICANEC

01:00 PM, 04.30.2008

i like it its really good tell me when u post more^^

BLOODYVAMP

11:53 AM, 04.30.2008

cool it iz great!!!!!

LITTLEMISSTROUBLE13

11:49 AM, 04.30.2008

thanks for you guys comments. and i know i misspelled which whitetrain i saw the mistake right after i posted this. i know this is weird but i wouldnt call it normal....although now im self-conscious about it...

LIVI

11:11 AM, 04.30.2008

I liked it, it did kick my brain's ass, but I still like it. Hey you might want to check your comment though. You put an e instead of a w in which.

WHITERAIN

10:24 AM, 04.30.2008

Very good ur wording... it really does mess with ur mind... but i like it...

BLACKROSERINI

09:59 AM, 04.30.2008

i'm sorry i dont like it that much but its ok, not bad not great just ok

DAXTER5

09:32 AM, 04.30.2008