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Sins of my Parents
This blood of mine
Darkened by him
And then lightened by her.
Frowns upon me.
I myself am where
Darkness meets light
Where night
Mingles with day
Where dark lips gave
Pure kisses
And lightened hands
Caressed earthen hips.
Too early,
A baby,
Regret .
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This is coooooooooool. *pop*
hey this is rlly neat! *love it*
Kinda deep but that's a good thing. You have great flow and content in this piece. Nice work! Keep it up! (:D) POP!!!
thanx really i appreciate everything yall have said
i loved it^^...*pop*
It's beautiful, but also very sad
it's very fluent...
kool
im very proud that you do this this that makes you feel good very proud
all my frends waching wana say some thing so here me:amaizing nice style keep working on it and you will becom famus =) chris: nice random dude: good job its nice mom: good job i love it dad:um i dont like the name but the porms good me:good job XD
*fall to ground i like it fill with meaning...interest....(can't stand normally right now)#pop
i like it^ ^i lov poems especially 1s like this^ ^
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
im imprest
this is a nice peace i would like more infiormation to come with it thought but its still good.. ^,..,^
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this poem is new and im very happy with because ive been tryin out this new style of writing and...idk....im just happy with this. after i wrote it i felt elated somehow (probably b/c of stress that ive been carrying). post comments and dont dont be afraid to be brutal b/c i like constructive criticism.