the day the sky turned black p1
in a village far away from the rest of the land a lonly girl walks alone wrapped in a black cloak. her name is amolla she has hair as black as a raven with skin as pale as snow,but the most unique thing about her is her eyes they hold a dark secret that clouds her heart. she walked queitly hoping no one will notice her.she stared up at the sky sadly and thought "only three more days till.......".miss amolla?amolla turned slowly.it was just sana a young girl who looked up tp amolla for some reason.what are you doing walking alone in the cold by yourself?said sana."well..uh i was just getting some fresh air" amolla said without looking at sanna." i dont think your father would want you to be out here alone".i know i just wanted to get out for a while before ......."oh isnt it your birthday soon amolla". amolla sighed and nodded before walking away. she could feel the evil slowly making its way out of her.end of part 1
in p2 amollas secret slowly comes aloat .what is supposed to happen in three days? what is hr inner evil and could there be a love in amollas life find out in p2
this part is kinna boring but it will get better
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SILLYCHIBI29
2006-10-11 14:52:24
kewl. I like it~!!! *cute smile*
SILLYCHIBI29
2006-10-11 14:51:51
I like it if you get far enough you should make a book =D
RYUO
2006-10-10 11:54:29
Nice decreption! I love how you copmared her skin to snow and against raven black hair it makes a good contrast. There are some spelling mistakes though. Please come check out my fiction, pretty please.
DREAMCOMICMAKER
2006-10-09 20:28:59