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Suko and Kiko: the jealous twins

A new day for me and my sister suko we are at a new school makin new friends and enemies so this boy comes up to me and Suko and says " Hey welcome to Caver High School !!" and of coarse since we don't wanna be rude we say thanks ! So later we make our enemie of the school year and her name is  Itara and she is suppose to be the most popular girl so she pushes us and says " How dare you losers get in my way!!"so we got so mad that we decided to seek revenge on Itara and any one who knows us witches know that ain't good.


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Just remember that ALL people, and specific places should be capitalized. you would do well to add some puncuation marks like commas. One single foe would be your ENEMY multiple foes would be your ENEMIES. When speaking in the plural sense...one should stay in that sense throughout the entire sentence. Other than that I think you are on the road to a lucrative carreer.

FURTIG


2008-05-18 13:40:40


This very good

ZODIAC100


2008-04-22 16:37:06


Very nice. Its a little short though.

VERDEKURAMA


2007-02-27 13:25:18


nice^_^

FAYELOVELOVE41125


2007-02-27 11:53:12


nice start... so it ends with vengence. Although is it "whiches" or "witches" on the last line?

NATURAL


2007-02-27 07:02:07


cool, wow you should write more

SAINTBLU


2007-02-27 06:19:34


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