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Suko and Kiko Vol. 2
Well later that day when the bell rang and every one was leaving to go to the next class me and my sister did the most classic spell to miss popular. We made her clothes dissapear and she was walking around in her underwear now she really hates us.YAY!!! So she went to the office cring so she can call her mom and get some more clothes. Like five minutes later the boy who we first met came up to me and Suko and said,"That was cool what you did to Itara wanna hang out?" So we agreed and then we found out his name was Hurouki, also he has a brother named Sakashi. So when the bell let classes out we met up with Hurouki and Sakashi and went to the.....
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Additional corrections: Need more commas in order to separate certains strings of information. you tried to make her clothes wink out of existence as in DISAPPEAR, then she went to the office CRYING. You are deffinitely getting better.
FURTIG
2008-05-18 13:45:34
Paart two is cool
ZODIAC100
2008-04-22 16:44:06
Very nice, I hope to read more.
VERDEKURAMA
2007-02-27 13:27:25
this is different^_^ i like it^_^
FAYELOVELOVE41125
2007-02-27 11:54:16
wow a alternative style
SAINTBLU
2007-02-27 06:20:00