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spider's touch

i find myself falling in love, falling into your web

and there's no way out, all that's left is to end this,

move in and deliver the fatal bite, then i'll be yours forever

 

 

You have me in your web,

your web of love and there's no way out,

your love is a a fatal thing, you always toy with me,

please just end this painful thing, please just decide now,

let me go or or end this quick

 

 

the venom flows through my blood, i'll be yours forever,

your web of love is eternal and i'll be yours forever


this is a song/poem thingy i thought of in civics at school because of the spider i drew on my hand. its bad but i just had to write it

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Tags: song,  poem,  thingy,  spider  Added 2008-04-15 08:24:25
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whhheeee!! dis is good! *pop* MORE MORE!!! plz? pplz?

CYBERMUFFIN


2008-08-30 09:56:08


i love it. very deep and understanding words.

DEAD


2008-08-26 03:53:50


wow. Ur a really good writer... *pop* I want to read more... keep writing

MISACA2


2008-07-10 07:55:27


hha its great ^^

SWEETLY92


2008-07-08 08:42:43


you all really like it? =o

MEGARYAN


2008-06-01 20:04:39


ooo i love it you should post more of your work here :)

VAMPIRESSKIA


2008-05-15 08:42:16


its ok but it needs to be more detailed make it longer add more descriptive words that is my advice my opinion u dont have to change it if u dont want too.

ROCKLEESGF


2008-05-15 07:05:28


These are the sad ache of love for some people

SHY0NE1


2008-04-15 19:12:35


Its true with some people. Unfortunately, they do like to toy with peoples feelings :)

ZEDR


2008-04-15 10:30:14


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