ART + LIFE
My Poem
WHY?Why? Why did you leave me?
What? What did I do wrong?
Am I just that different?
Do you think we do not belong?
Please dear, tell me, I would really like to know,
Why you just up and left me?
That day when my heart screamed "no."
I felt as if you cut me deep,
And the blood would not stop flowing.
And even though I thought you liked me,
In my heart I end up knowing.
For what I know to me is clear,
That every boy I meet.
They always say "Oh, yes I like you,"
But break up within a week.
So now, my love, I have to say,
And I will not make it long.
What the pain in my heart is telling me:
Without you, it's hard to go on.
Feel free to comment.(p.s) If you want to e-mail me it's: evil_kitty_73@yahoo.com. I like getting e-mails. :)
If anyone is reading this then I will tell you what the following poem is about and why I wrote it. What it is about is my past lover, he broke up with me and so I wrote what my heart was saying to me.
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*cries**sniff*such a beautiful poem!!
JENNIFERPATTERSON
2008-02-18 15:19:12
Ahh young love, sounds Like you loved him so. Chances are he got scared or some form of peer pressure got to him.
AEONDRAGON
2007-12-12 23:37:44
i love your poem i think you shouln't give up on love though
HIKARIANDCHRIS1
2007-12-12 10:56:53
Cool poem i'll comment you up when i get mine on there and if that really happened that guy is an jerk
LUMIARA
2007-12-11 08:02:22
awsome, you can definatly feel the vibe its trying to send out!
BAMBOOHEART
2007-12-11 07:55:30
wow...its really good^^ and i can tell ur feelings when i read it
XXFURUBA4EVERXX
2007-12-11 07:26:42