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 Broken Heart

 

 

 

All alone the lost heart yearns for her love,

 

 

 

Yet.... all it receives is hate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

The calling soul yearns for her fulfill ness,

 

 

 

Yet.... all it gets is emptiness.

 

 

 

 

 

 

The lone person cries out to the wind for her, with a voice full of melancholy.

 

 

 

Yet...all is lost in the howl of air.

 

 

 

 

 

 

He sings for her company,

 

 

 

Yet...is applauded only be silence. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Left alone by her to care for the bottomless wound left in his....

 

 

 

Broken heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

By: TARA

 

 

 


a short poem i made .. v. depressing...free to criticize

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Tags: broken,  heart,  love,  depressed  Added 2008-01-06 23:24:16
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T.T that was deep it made me wanna cry.

LILBUNS03


2008-01-23 09:05:31


that's y i will charish my girl.

CRIMSONTHORN741


2008-01-16 07:16:51


that is really sweet but sad.

EVILMONKEY900


2008-01-13 00:54:38


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