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This is were people can get a firt hand look at Crimson Love. A book about vampires, love, death, jam-pact with magic and much much more. i hope you take the time to read this and give me your thoughts. Please pay no atention to the spelling, gramer And mis use of words it's still a work in progress.Thanks:)

 

Chapter One: my life

 

           

 

            Ok stories start out with a problem right they start in the middle of some ones life.

 

But mine starts when I was born. You think oh cute a baby how "harmless". You would

 

think my mother would stick up for child her loving daughter forever. But since I was

 

born the second I took a breath my life was planed out for me. I was deferent from others

 

in my clan. My mom just did as she was told by our leaders "The Elders" so they

 

wouldn’t take me away from her she never treated my illnesses with meds because they

 

would turn my blood like every one else’s "not pure" it was the most untouched blood

 

you could sense in the clan and the most tempting. The one that would ever touch my

 

blood would be our leader who had power over The Elders. Lord Sebastian. Sebastian in

 

Greek terms the name means revered which means to regard with respect tinged with

 

awe, awe meaning fear. Bull shit! I didn't respect him I didn’t even know him and I was

 

supposed to give him my blood. I was supposed to love this guy I didn’t know. And I had

 

to respect his name if spoken. Truth be told every time his name was spoken and I was in

 

the room I would get stares from every direction. Every one respected me because of him

 

not because of who I was because of who would drink my blood when I was 18 I would

 

be his forever. Not knowing at first who he was behind closed doors he looked 20 years

 

old ever sense I was born he was even older than my great grandfather. I wasn’t known as

 

Catalin Black author of a couple books not best sellers but pretty good horror and

 

romance books. My last name not matching the meaning of my first name. Catalin means

 

pure and clear and Black meaning dark talk about irony.

 

 

            My mom does what ever the elders tell her to do or they would take me away

from her. They also told her if she ever told Lord Sebastian they were telling her they

 

would take me away they would kill her. The Elders were managers of our world they

 

watched things when ever Lord Sebastian was away. This is more often than you think.

 

He was gone 11 and half months out of a year. Personally I didn’t like long destine

 

relationships and in that 11 and half months the only people that new were he was were

 

the elders. They told no one were he was. And I and my mom lived in London. first I

 

have to tell you this I don’t know what Lord Sebastian looks like so that also made me a

 

little worried if I ever saw him on the street and him knowing me and I not knowing him

 

and not bowing in his presents. (Blah. why did I worry about it I was going to run away

 

before I was 18 anyway.)

 

 

            My world um were do I start ok. We are all vampires’ day walkers to be correct

 

so you don’t confuse me with the night stalkers you know in your books. We live around

 

the world but during major seasons we lived together in our secret palace. Covered in

 

black lace cretins. Guy GAW over girls like me but me being clamed by the Lord dared

 

not even think of touching me they didn’t even look at me in ways they looked at other

 

girls. I was friends with a few guys’ just friends. No girls wanted to be my friends

 

because I was clamed by the one guy they wished were theirs. I don’t know why they

 

wanted him. Most girls attended vampire things but I wasn’t allowed. The one time I

 

could see Lord Sebastian the Elders kept me locked away from the life of my vampire

 

world were I could see him. I wonder why they keep me locked away when he was here.

 

            My mom would hug me so hard when I came back last night after not seeing her

 

for half a month. She treated me to her favorite cake for dessert and I went to bed not

 

even  talking to her about my trip home I was tired and I had a town to explore tomorrow

and churches to break in to and be alone to think about my future with out a Lord

 

Sebastian.

 

 

 

 

                                                Chapter two: chapel hottie

 

 

 

            I walked to the usual chapel I loved to contemplate in. I climbed the latter up the

 

side of the building and climbed in the open balcony and stealthy snuck down the spiral

 

staircase and made my way across the arch that would hover over millions of people on a

 

Sunday but it being Monday it hovered over empty seats filled with void.

 

            "I thought I was the only one that broke in to churches on week days." a voice

 

said from bellow said. I knelt down and stopped breathing for a second my heart raced. I

 

wasn’t alone. Didn’t like that. “I’m not going to bite you. You could come down" the

 

voice reasherd. I looked over the side and a Guy with pitch black hair was holding a

 

leather bond book leaning against the black marble walls.

 

 

            "I prefer it up here. Away from people" I answered the guy back

 

            "I’m not people I’m a person" he corrected "please come down" he pleaded

 

            I walked down the gothic staircase and he was still reading when I got there” what

 

are you reading” I asked curiously as I sat in the chair across from him. He looked up at

 

me, and closed the book.

 

            "Nothing really, that’s good just... a work book I have to memorize" he looked at

 

me with a seductive look. He had deep midnight blue wolf looking eyes they made me

 

 

melt in the golden preacher chair and he had snowy white skin like mine.” so why are

 

you here I’ve never seen you in here before” He loosened his tie a little it was the deepest

 

crimson red tie I had ever seen, and his black suit made mine and his pitch black hair

 

look white.

 

 

            "I just got back from some were and decided to come to the only church with out

 

crosses and people. And I was bored"

 

 

            "So you broke in to a church at 3 am in the morning? And why you were up there

 

on the arch isn't it scared." That was true it was scared but in my mind it was only scared

 

on Sundays.

 

 

 

            "Only on Sundays" I replied” what they don’t know won’t hurt them. Why are

 

you here?" I stared back in to his seductive wolf eyes with my pure baby bat blue eyes.

 

 

            "Trying to get away from a traveling partner that won’t leave my alone and I’m

 

very busy and he won’t just let me have a few seconds to my self."

 

 

            "Who is your traveling partner?" I went on secretly hoping it wasn’t a girl.

 

Because he wasn’t bad looking he was a chapel hottie.

 

 

            "My little brother" he looked at the book instead of me for a second and than

 

looked back at me" Whats your name miss arch girl"

 

 

            "First what’s yours Mr. .tie?"

 

 

            "Sebastian. Now you please" his smile made me melt.

 

 

            "Catalin, I have to go I'm sorry sir. Nice meeting you." I walked to the door and

 

down the street to my apartment were my mom was talking to a familiar face it was the 3rd Elder here to give my mother more orders on how to raise me "Molly" he said with a sad voice.

            "Yes I understand Ray"

            "Hi mom what’s going on? Ray how is you and what are you doing here?” I said as I sat across from him and next my mother. My mother looked at me than to him.

            "Cat, be nice” she fiddled around with papers from the book store she ran. 

            "I'll be going now Molly I’ll see you next month." He got up he wasn't dressed in normal elder drag he was wearing a white tee shirt and blue jeans. (Wired) “Nice seeing you again Catalin"

             "It’s Cat not Catalin to you Mr. Ray." I said with a nice smile.

            "Ok see you later Cat.” he kissed me politely on the cheek. He was the only elder I actually liked but I never showed it to any one... He had snow white hair and icy skin. He had comforting green eyes that looked more ancient than Atlantis. Usually elders wore black or white robes Ray wore white. He was pretty cool. He left the apartment. My mother turned to me.

            "Cat, be a little bit nicer to Ray please. He’s means well." yeah right I said to me self he just had the hots for my mom. 

            "Yes of course Molly he means well for you not me. He loves you mom it’s written all over his face. Even if humans say vampires are heartless he isn’t” my mother blushed little, she adored him. It was also written all over her face as well. Her brown eyes sparkled when she was around him and her beach blond hair was always perfect before he came for his monthly visit. He was nice I had nothing against him I never known my dad so he would be just fine for one. I guess...

            "Cat honey he is nice. She looked at me intensely. I wasn’t supposed to go in to churches with out her permission.

            “I went to The Chapel a block away. The doors were opened was partly truthful.

            "Cat not with out permission next time please.” I didn’t answer I didn’t want my mom to know about the tie guy Sebastian. And I was his Arch Girl. My mother went in to the livening room and got the phone before it rang which she usually did. "Ok "she said to the speaker on the other line.” October 13th. Why?" October 13th was my birthday in two weeks I would be 18. Who was she talking to about my 18th birthday? "yes of course” she said with out a scene of love in her voice more concern. Probably for me more than any one else. "Of course good bye" she hung up the phone “Cat please, go to bed you need to help me with the store tomorrow."

            "Who was that?" I interrogated

            "no one Cat, go to bed” she looked nerves

            "Mom please, tell me what’s happening on October 13th on my 18th birthday" I continued ignoring her demand for bed time. Be a little concerned for my sanity.

            "Nothing Cat I want you to go to bed now!” she pointed to my door in frustration. And standing her ground.

            "Fine molly im going" I slammed my door I looked at my bed that was perfectly made I’ve never slept in it. it was just there if a human found there way in to my room. It looked comfy but not my taste. There was a curtain that separated 75%, of my room from human, and the vampriess decorated side. When you looked at my room it looked 6 by 6 but really it was 30 by 12. I walked threw the curtain and searched for my secret door with a hidden knob to open it when I found it I opened it to a gothic stile room with candles lines the shelves. Books lined my window bench. And in front of the black lace Curtins covering my window bench was a black coffin. I opened it. It was lined with black laced sheets and feathered pillows covered with soft black pillow covers. It wasn’t made I never made my coffin. The only time I made it was before I went away from home.  I had band stickers on the inside cover. Stickers from my favorite Goth movies TV shows and so on. I got in it and closed the pitch black cover. I could see in the dark but I closed my eyes and tried to fall asleep in the comfort of my coffin. Hoping I would never awake so I would never turn 18. I couldn’t stop thinking about Mr. Tie Sebastian. So I got out of my coffin and settled in to my window bench and took out my sketch book and started to sketch him. When I was done I was looking in to his deep wolf eyes. I could sleep now that the memories had been recorded. "Now good night world" I thought as I looked out the window on to the wakening city as it started to stir. I got back in to my coffin and found my sleep, and I slept.

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