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UNMASKED

                         

 

 

Hidden in a mask is my true identity; not even a mask I made but threw others eyes .One scornful battering glance is all it took to hide me in imprisoning walls.         

           

            Burning inside is a small  damp candle that is slowly being  extinguished and smothered by tears of pain and sorrow .No words can reach me threw my mask ; only  insults and  evil actions .But yet inside burns that small damp candle ready to shine as bright as the sun ones free of its socially bonding chains .

 

Today the mask, chains, and walls all fall and crumble at every word I speak. For the light has burned through at last. I will no longer hide behind my books and my enchanting poems in which I placed my soul, hoping my friends would find it and rescue me. But I’m asking for help no longer for I am free to be me. Clap if you will thinking it is a poem or a story; just meaning less words said by a child with no knowledge .But inside me this all is happens behind my broken mask.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

comment or i take it down in a month

 

 

 


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Tags: hiddeninamask  Added 2008-04-15 15:53:27
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lol you have made threats now =0 lol. knida like me, except I hide behind the comp, if you cant already tell... I like =P *pop*

2008-07-13 13:27:34


that is so beautiful......really...wonderful job...*pop*

2008-07-12 22:09:22


*_* Wow!!!!!!! That was sooooooooo cooooooll!!!!!!!! I like, I like!!

2008-04-16 18:32:42


wow

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