are vampires really that bad? &_&
PLEASEEEEEEEEEE comment, i want to know what you think.if you dont i will take it down in a month This taste in my mouth So sweat and perfect I have to have more However, can i get it with out causing pain? If i can, how? For every bite, i hear a scream For every lick, i feel a shudder But if I deny my LUST, i will kill instead of what i do now I wish to cry for the pain i bring However, when i try only blood comes to my eyes I was born into this world to be a monster But with the feeling of dread at feeding time So comes the want for more I have dreams like humans I breathe like them I sleep like them I feed like them But Yet i cannot be like them I was born a monster Therefore, a monster i must stay Till my dying day With more blood coming out my eyes I realize I can never die
vampires are normaly forst into this world agenst there will, or created by some weird guy/girl{ last time i did not put girl my friends whent all "girls are equl to guys" on me it was really wierd} others want to live forever, but some just want the power. this poem is from the point of few of a "forst in" vampire, my mom hates it so this may be the last thing like this so please enjoy
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that is really beautiful....i love it...and i love vampires!
VAMPIREKNIGHTFREK
2008-07-12 22:15:58
i like it.^^
REDPANDA
2008-07-12 22:03:02
Wow..It hit me hard. that is great. but there is a monster in every one of us. *pop*
SAYA01
2008-07-12 21:23:55
um....i wrote this before twilight came out......
REN14LOVE
2008-07-12 19:47:48
wow...i agree. if u read Twilight by Stephanie Myer{i think i spelled that wrong} its a really good series and it kinda agrees with wat u put on here^^ like i said...i agree. and i LUV it. ^^
CRAZYGREYWOLFGIRL
2008-07-11 11:52:29
Wow. This hit me so strongly that I had to write a review of it as well ^_^
KANASHA
2008-04-19 05:56:51
Ack!!!!! Why does she hate it??! It's great!! You sound like you've been reading my thoughts on the Pheonix Chronicles! I was shocked!!!! lol It's good insght on just how poeple think and feel, whether monster or human. I'm writing something almost identical to this in my fiction (but I thought of it before I read this so I'm not copying you. I hate plagarists) I like this poem. It's fantabulous and why some people hate it is a mystery to me. No offense to your mom but I'm rolling my eyes at her. lol Don't quit!! This is good so you have to write more!!!!! lol *pop & clip & rate* ^_^
KANASHA
2008-04-19 05:32:22