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worthless tears
My tears are pointless
You are gone
Nothing will change that
But why did you have to go
You hugged me then walked away
Your arms left imprints on me
Your warmth will always be with me
I will never forget you
Maybe that is why I cry these
Worthless tears
I fell in your blood
My tears mixed with it
I was the only person that is alive
That saw your last expression
It was that of remorse and passion
Because the last thing you saw
Was my tear streaked face
Maybe one day you will see my smile again
But until then
Will you always know
How much I love you
And how much your good-byes scars my life
Maybe since you would no longer
Be in my life
That is why heaven took you in
So long and farewell to my beloved David
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past and present tense need to be remembered, but beautifully sad... he will be gratefull, where ever he is now for you. just dont be caught in the web of the past, for its a horrible curse to be rid of. he says he has forgiven you, be happy now
...that's just awful.....i'm so sorry to hear that...must be hard........the poem is wonderful though.....great job...*pop*
oh I'm sorry... that really sucks... sorry if that didn't sound sincere, but it is... I can't imagine what it'd be like to lose someone that close...
great poem its amazingly written i loved it ^^
excellent poem. the choice of words is excellent and it was worth reading.
i'm so sorry, that has to be extremly hard...
wow. im so srry. i will never understand y life is so crule...
Oh, I am so sorry...
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I am righting this on the day of my EX-boyfriends funeral. He died after breaking up with me{in a car crash. the driver was drunk and ran him over} ,and I will never stop loving him even after I am married. And this I swear.{his name is not david}